Pillow

Description

I heard a song while driving that said 'use me like a pillow'

and right away, I came up with this idea, for a short gri one-shot.

 

I hope you like this my little fellas, didn't have time to double check this so every mistake or spelling error you will find, belongs to me, do NOT take it away :<

Good Gri night for thou all! :D

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kameleon
#1
Chapter 1: This is so beautiful. I was and am still blushing really hard when reading this. Really love your witty choice of words, especially using country names in it. If I knew it, I'm sure I would've passed my geography class with flying colors hahaha :P
Correct me if I'm wrong, but this story gives me that beautiful feeling of both knowing and understanding your partner as a whole, inside and out. And comparing your body like a world map? Daaaamn. It's so brilliant. It gives me the adventurous feeling in their relationship, that each part of the body is to be bare and explored.
My favorite part? Well, I love the words you used to describe how Seungri becomes Ji's muse in writing songs. "...black dark stripes forming along your spine..." God, you completely got me at this. <3
There's just one word to describe this: Beautiful. This may or may not be overused, but I can't find another word fitting this story even better.
I'm so glad that I took some time to "stalk" you and your stories. Otherwise, I would've missed this! Haha!
sadiraelau
#2
Chapter 1: This is good! The words are so beautiful!! Lovely~~ ^^
msky_v1p #3
Chapter 1: It's beautiful!!!
It's interesting and new and I really really really like it~
mintiebear #4
Chapter 1: Ok wow that was quite different - something I couldn't just skim-read and understand! Your writing is lovely and I loved the level of descriptiveness ^^