Erasing True Colours

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Define yourself. You are your mistakes and imperfections. Your tendency to sleep too late and laugh too long. You are the mole you've always hated (the one on your neck) and the swirl of lines etched in your fingers.

But what if you didn't like the way you were? What if you've always wanted to look better, to act better, to think better? There's surgery for the physical blemishes. But, what if you've always wanted to be better? Well then, welcome to the year 2322. Don't worry, detrimental personality traits (or just personality in general) are on the bridge of extinction here. The whole idiosyncrasy thing all just boils down to science anyway.

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nina3132 #1
Oh my gosh...THIS STORY IS AMAZING!!I CANT EVEN BELIEVE IT!WOW!I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!❤️❤️❤️
optimus-unreal
#2
Chapter 2: ... What just happened.

I was so excited to finally see an update after all these months. Suddenly bombarding readers with all these districts was a lot of information to take in. And I don't really remember a girl from the first chapter. I hope this all clears up as the story progresses. I found that the fingerprints and such was very intriguing.
optimus-unreal
#3
Chapter 1: Ohmygod this was so eloquently written and your use of vocabulary flows so well. I especially love the mentioning of human genomes and such, because it makes sense. I have a fairly good background with genetics, and some stories that I read bring up traits but don't actually have an understanding of it, so props to you. I am in love with this story and look forward to your next update.