Chapter 1: Omg I.... cry..... I.... Love this! Myfeels! @,@ This is beautiful omg! MarkBum... Sorry I can't write anything that makes sense rn bc I'm still crying... </3
I love your stories. Thankyou ily!
Please write more for them and- *bursts into tears*
Chapter 1: Okay, but, um, NO? God, it's nine in the morning and I should not be crying over fanfiction, but here I am. Jesus, this was so beautifully written. I usually hate the cliché 'killing someone off for someone to say I love you' thing (which happens a lot more than you would expect lmao), but this was honestly so lovely and the way you portrayed Jaebum after Mark's death was just...I can't even English right now, I'm still crying too hard. This was wonderful.
Chapter 1: Oh my god
I love the idea of Mark saying all the love stuffs but Jaebum dont, but they are still together anyway
The way you potray their feelings with words is just at the right amount, not exaggerating but the reader can feel it, omg great story!
I'm so upset this started out so cute and I was hoping for some fluff but now I'm crying omg it got so sad. :( (but it's okay, you're a really good writer and I love your stuff, I'm just feeling a little backhanded by feels)
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