Like Fire and Ice

Description

Wonsik contemplates the relationship between VIXX’s two oldest members. 

Foreword

VIXX; Wonsik's POV + Neo/Leon (Hakyeon x Taekwoon); Mild Fluff; 2987w; PG; One-Shot

Inspired by the following prompt: [x]

Disclaimer: This piece is a work of fiction and nothing more. The characters depicted in this story are in no way realistic representations of their actual counterparts, and should be taken as literary inspirations of the latter and nothing more. No form of defamation is intended.

 

Decided to try my hand at something other than angst for once! Since I'm still wary of attempting pure fluff, I took a more subtle route (thanks to the prompt above) to ease myself into the habit. Hopefully this won't be too confusing a read!

Crossposted: [x]

devils_solitude xx

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PurpLeliciousKPOP
#1
Chapter 1: Wow! You described them the way they should be described! This is wonderfully written authornim! Keep writing :)
Taekoppa
#2
Chapter 1: oh wow this is written so prettily! it had this beautiful eligance and flow and damn i wish i could write like that...I'm completely unable to do comtempary sort of stuff mine's just...bam plot lol but once again really well written!! don't sell yourself short! (^_^)
TheAlmightyStarlight #3
Chapter 1: This was not lousy in the slightest! It's beautifully written and I loved every minute of it! The fire and ice analogy was thought through very well, in my opinion (along with being incredibly accurate), and didn't seem disjointed at all. It's very different from usual fluff, and I found that really refreshing to read. It also has a poetic flow to it that kept it going from paragraph to paragraph, which was helpful and also genius. I really, really loved this, and I hope to see more Neo stories from you in the future! ^^ <3
eunichii
#4
Oh come on how could you say its lousy?! The words you use are poetic and a perfect match of your plot! It was well written ^^ so thank you for the awesome oneshot ^^
StarShipSailor
#5
Chapter 1: You! This is not lousy! This is... The beauty of beautifulness! (Even though that's not a word XD) Awwwww~ I love this~
Xoxflyxox #6
Chapter 1: I love this. It's not how a normal piece of fluff would go, and because it ignores the standard formula I think it works incredibly well. The fire&ice analogy is beautiful and is very ridiculously accurate in its description of Hakyeon and Taekwoon. This is truly a wonderful piece, and it doesn't feel very disjointed, more like a real stream of thought. Slightly dysfunctional but still on topic ^^
kimminah89
#7
Chapter 1: Awww this is good