keep your hands where I can see them

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Description

 

Chanyeol's girlfriend was underage. He mastered self-control. Kind of.

 

Foreword

 

Title: keep your hands where I can see them

Length: 8.7k

Genre: fluff

Rating: NC-17

Warning: language, 6 years , xiuhan, (real warning here: my bad attempt at writing rated stuff)

 

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yeolmyheart
#1
Chapter 1: idk how many times i read this story and still like it...
honestly maybe more than 5 times ??? i dont really remember hahahha
babybm93 #2
Chapter 1: I want sequeeel ohmygod I just cant stop giggling because I. LOVE. CHANYEOL. AND. BOMI. SO. MUCH!!! ♡

ps: i love you nico, and your stories!
ps2: please comeback soon so that I can read more of your amazing stories~
Hepo123 #3
Chapter 1: Ouh. I thought it was a series of one shot. My bad.
Hepo123 #4
Chapter 1: This is the best one shot ever! I was laughing my head off in the car. Thank you for the story Nico! >< I'm gonna finish all this first
mrflamethunder #5
Chapter 1: I love this. Sth to be re-read again in the future. I wish there were a sequel :D
sobbieheartz #6
Chapter 1: Yaaaaay! I'm starting to imagine thing between Bomi and Chanyeol. Argh! I don't know why they're so perfect to be ship. Wooooooaaaah! This is really great! I hope to read more soon. Hehehe. Thumps up author-nim. Your really great!
jessi828 #7
Chapter 1: it was so cute....and so detailed r rate...kekeke..well written....where is Sequel???
YOONBOMI7
#8
Chapter 1: Kyaaaaaa this is perfection. Innocent Bomi and the innocent Chanyeol (a different kind of innocent if you know what I mean) great story profession and development and just the right amount of . I love this. Simply amazingand gonna agree with some of the comments made below. Simply bravo! *Gulf clap*
_noonim
#9
Chapter 1: first, I still remembered I read this in the mall, where thousand people walked back and forth behind me (and it's like everyone knew what I was reading about), I'm glad I re-read this again alone in my dark room hahahaa and it's 1:30 am in the morning; no one would bother me lol

this fics is like the whole level of biasing bomi and chanyeol-- lol you made them too perfect. you are worshipping them lol. kind girl--cute face-- bubbly personality --volunteer in orphanage. while the other one band member-- husky voice -- handsome -- innocent -- lovely-- always defended his friend (ehem. yifan. ehem)-- straight (i have to include this sorry) -- not into things-- TATTOOS (i love men with tatoos, that's why) they are tooooo perfect. -- maybe just bomi's age. :D

honestly, it's really really hard to imagine bomi with this 'cute and bubbly dongsaeng' image- I don't know why? It's not because the R-part. It always appeared somebody else in my mind; in the club scene and every time bomi said, "Oppa-yah!"

I like how you pictured the insecureness of bomi and chanyeol :D it really happens in real life and it's so natural (blame bomi's age). and the pre-story; the band details (dammmmnnnn rock band with these perfect members); lay and his room; xiuhan and their detail, also how bomi adopted as their love child; how the band disagreed at their relationship; and yifan's angry look.

unlike ming, I was burrowing my eyebrows when I read junmyeon as her sibling. I expected to be Doojoon? lol

my fave part is not the rated-part, but surprisingly the moment after she spit his-- it's so sweet how he reassured her, and how they kissed sweetly after that. fufufufufu i grinned big times.

did I say last time that you did a great job? great-job and well written as always <3 <3 <3 now I'll wait patiently for more exopink hahahahaha thank you for writing this <3
rosebaby
#10
Chapter 1: OMG CRIES WHY DID YOU RUIN MY SUCH INNOCENT MIND /cough. okay maybe not but im getting butterflies and everything its so sweet and cute and perfect !! but i honestly cant imagine bomi doing something like that and i just had to check if this was just a one shot and completed and it is which im v disappointed about bc im wanting more lmao !! so SEQUEL PLEASE omg it was really really good author-nim esp it's your first time!! i just love this ship chanmi so much aahhh my feels!! i hope you write more coughcough in the future haha!! good job !! also,, on a side note shouldnt this be put on rated R?