As Noh is to Phun, You are to Me

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They spend of night searching for him, but find nothing. At about 3 or so White finally breaks down, crying and shaking, terrified that his best friend is really gone and missing. Parents are called, and then the cops. Soon even a few fans are looking, but nobody can find even a trace of where the boy might have gone.

 

 

 

Foreword

They spend of night searching for him, but find nothing. At about 3 or so White finally breaks down, crying and shaking, terrified that his best friend is really gone and missing. Parents are called, and then the cops. Soon even a few fans are looking, but nobody can find even a trace of where the boy might have gone.

“Where is he? Where is my son? What did you say to him? When you finally found out that he’s gay, you curse him and kick him out? Is that the case?” Captain’s mother is shaking White, hands tight on his shoulders, eyes wild and tear filled. White feels ice creep down his spine. Captain is gay? Why haven’t I noticed anything all these years.  And I said all of those things! Tears instantly pool and spill over. White doesn’t know what to do with himself, so he just shakes his head at Captain’s mother and pulls away. He’s walking back to the dorm when hands grab his wrist and whip him around. This time its Pineare and Ssing, both looking exhausted. Pineare is the one who grabbed him, and is the one who pulls him into a hug.

“White, it’ll be ok. We’ll find Captain, and you guys will talk. You’ll get all your feelings out for each other and everything will be ok. You didn’t do anything, he misunderstood. It’s alright White, let it out. Before he comes back, so when he does, you can be calm and comfort him.” Pineare whispers in his ear as he cries, deep body racking sobs. Thoughts fly around his head, from why, to what, to when, but one keeps repeating.

     Please come back to me.

 

Just something that literlly came up and out in 4 hours. I just had to get it out. I've had writer's block really bad the last 4 or so months, so this was really nice to do:)

Comments

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C-MElancholy
#1
Chapter 1: Thanks so much, this was really sweet.
PamWond #2
Chapter 1: Have just come across your story and I really enjoyed it!
empty12
#3
Chapter 1: No words. This is just so freaking good!! I literally died at the part where White said 'Like Noh is to Phun, you are to me.' Waaahhh I'm totally fangirling over this right now. I love you for giving us fans this. <3
Wingedman
#4
Chapter 1: Hi, Bambikill just recommended that I read your fic, even though slash isn't really my thing either. But wow, I really liked your premise and the writing is cute. I also agree with her that the title is absolutely perfect. I don't mind reading a bit more of this, actually, lol but in my mind somehow CT is more of a sunny personality though. Keep writing!
Bambikill
#5
Chapter 1: Hey :) Just finished reading now, after your request :)
I'll be honest - I don't really like fics about White and Captain at all, just about Phun and Noh ^^ (Just my personal preference.)
So in that way, the story doesn't appeal to me - BUT the story in itself is cute and well written :)
Your writing is good - you have the language and flow of storytelling going for you and you keep the reader interested in what's going to happen next. I would love to read a P&N story from you if you ever write one!
I love the title and that part of the story - so cute <3
The only thing I can point out as something you should check - is that there are some spelling and grammar errors here and there.
Overall - it's good writing ^^ Keep going!