Chapter 2: whoa.... this is so.. beautifully written! its super fluff and cute and it feels like I read a fairytale instead! ♡ the ending crack me up tho ㅋㅋㅋ
Chapter 2: This so cute and cool!!!!!!!! I loved how they worked theyre issue it was cute ,i hope you'd a keo after this !!?? Or maybe a cute hyukbin that will delightful to see!!!!!! I was surprised when you mentioned the title of the fic named after taekwoon for a cake , it was cute, for a moment i thought this is navi right? Hhaha lol
Chapter 2: oh my god this is so amazing!!! my neo feels are overflowing ☆*:.｡. o(≧▽≦)o .｡.:*☆ author-nim you are so talented! and this is so fluffy hehehehe i can melt :--D
This is such an amazing story! I honestly almost cried when Hakyeon and Wonshik were having their fight. I loved how you described everything with details! You are an amazing writer. I love this story.
Chapter 2: This was such a lovely sweet story. I love the setting, Hakyeon and Wonsik running a bakery together sounds fabulous and I've always thought those two work together well irl so it's easy to picture them making a great partnership on many levels :) I really enjoyed the way you introduced their background and the other characters in their story. The whole thing of Taekwoon's kiss was a bit heartbreaking but it felt very 'real', their feelings weren't easily swept under the carpet but needed to be dealt with. And I did love that Wonsik still chose to propose as he had originally planned to do before, ready to show his absolute love for Hakyeon. So beautiful. And I also loved the introduction of Jaehwan to Taekwoon towards the end too, it was a very fitting way to bring the story together and heal his hurts and heartbreak. The details of the tasty delights that were made and sold in the bakery were wonderful too, I thought that those extra little details made the story come alive all the more and actually gave it a sweet flavour of its own :)
Chapter 2: Thank you! It was such a pleasure to read your story! I love how it felt like a rollercoaster of emotion in this second chapter. First, I was almost heartbreaking with Hakyeon's reaction to the kiss, and then, I was overwhelmed with all the cuteness and happy feelings! The ending is just perfect (naughty Wonshik, lol) and I can't wait to read about Jaehwan and Taekwoon!
Chapter 2: From Beginning to end it was a great story! My heart goes out for Leo, but damn that ship really does sail well XD. Hope you write more soon~~
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