(EXO Sehun) A Better One

Link:http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/887284/a-better-one-seulgi-exo-sehun-redvelvet-seulhun

Summary: Oneshot.Sehun friendzoning Red Velvet's Seulgi. Simple.

Review: Nothing too dramatic here. But it made realize how painful being friendzoned can be. I didn't intend to read it at first since I was looking for OC fics, not idolxidol stories but I'm somehow glad I found this. It's not tragic, but sad, but somewhere in the story, I see hope. For a better one in the future. This story made me take an interest in Seulgi and now I really like her.

Some grammar mistakes but not very serious. And idk why but I dislike the fact that Sehun, the "perfect" guy fell for a "perfect" girl. It's the reality, really, Cinderella thing rarely exists nowadays but... Idk.

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Hephaistos #1 Jan 14, 2016 08:37:20

Chapter 12: Yoooooooooooooooooo thank you for the feature! I've updated and edited now, so it's not in 2nd person POV, it's 3rd instead :) Made the flow better, hehe. I super appreciate it!

Hephaistos #2 Jun 14, 2015 11:23:52

Eyo, do you feature one shots as well? I've got a few pretty solid ones, and two chaptered stories, with Chen and D.O respectively as main characters . Let me know if I can leave my stuff for you to read!