Chapter 1: OMG I DIDN'T REALIZE I WROTE TOO LONG I AM SO SORRY.

/clears throat. So, about the grammar, yes, I'm quite weak at this section. It's hard when I don't speak and use English that often in my daily life, so it's difficult for me to convey this story in other language that is not our main. I'll ask my beta to fix any of the mistakes, and I know there's a lot, but I just don't know where did I do wrong here ;_;

So, thank you so much for taking your time, for the insightful review, I learnt a lot from this. I will try to improve myself to write better in English, because through writing, I improve little by little when I practice. I kind of had a strong grip of the basic of English when I was 18, and I'm still learning how to improve my English. Thank you again, Fera. I will credit you in the moment. ^^

Chapter 1: Hello, Fera ^^ First off, thank you so much for taking your time to finally read and review my story, and I really appreciate your work here :)

Uhm, let me start on the title first. Tbh, there's a lot of other titles that I intended to put as the main one, but then Idk how but Man in the Portrait came at last when I almost finished writing the second chapter. So, I couldn't think of any other title that suits this story the most because my brain can't also work well these days OTL. Secondly, some of the reviewers also thought that the font is way too small for their liking, and I did notice and aware about that. It's just that, when I set the font to a bigger one, it turned out to be quite big to my liking? OTL I maybe sound selfish for not thinking about my readers, but I think that the font that I'm using now is quite okay? HAHA.

And uhm, about the foreword /sighs. I'm really bad at writing description as well as the foreword. You said that I'm good at those but when it comes to these two, I just can't work my brain, like I would always spoil the story too much when I'm not supposed to. So, I've changed the description like you said, but it's not a good one. I'll ask my beta for the suggestion. So, thanks for reminding me about that ^^

Moving on to the plot, I'm so glad that you like it. I mean, I'm really afraid thinking that this story might not suit to your liking. I have to clarify something here, um, Mr. Byun didn't really have a conversation with Chanyeol, I mean they did, but it's actually Mr. Byun talking to himself and he didn't know that Chanyeol was actually replying to him. You know, like Chanyeol cakap dalam hati sebenarnya so that's why I italicized the words because those are only Chanyeol's thoughts :) I was thinking about that too, about the dream, because some of my readers were getting a bit confused about the dream so I might have to explain about it later in my next chapters. Thanks for the suggestion, uhm, I might apply it in my story ^^