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we offer beta, reviews & writing prompts for you all ~ 

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What is a beta - reader? 
A beta-reader is a non-professional reader who reads a written work, generally fiction, with the intent of looking over the material to find and improve the elements such as grammar and spelling as well as give suggestions to improve the story, its characters or its setting. Beta readers are not explicitly proofreaders or editors but can serve in that context. 
 
What is a writing prompt?
A writing prompt refers to a certain idea that gives inspiration to a writer to write about a certain topic or the idea offered. 
 
 
 
RULES & GUIDELINES
one. subscribing is, yes, a must. those who are not subscribe to this shop will not be entertained. you may or may not unsubscribe after your request is finished and done. two. credit the shop in your story if we've ever lent service to you in any of the three things we offer. three. comment for a request ( form done below ) if you want a review or beta. comment "using this" for the prompt desired. four. do not claim the prompt ideas as yoursfive. stories reviewed that have a score over 90 will be featured. six. don't even think about hiring a beta-reader if your planning to delete your story afterwards. seven. please do not put your stories into subscribers-only mode while reviewing.
 
 
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Rubrics:
title: 5
description & foreword: 10
grammar & spelling: 20
originality: 10
plotline: 20
flow: 10
character development: 15
overall enjoyment: 10


 
Forms
beta
title:
story link:
summary:
characters:
genre:
chapters: (state if one/two/threeshot) no more than 20
what you want the beta-reader to focus most on: (like the plot, character development, grammar, spelling & etc.)
beta-reader: (check stafflist for availability)
 
review
title:
story link:
summary:
genre:
characters:
chapters: no more than 20
reviewer: (check stafflist for availability)

 
 
staff
position:
experience:
strong points: (what type of genre you like/hate
or you're good at grammar and spelling and etc.)

 
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yuu_sama #1
Review

Title: Six Drops to Ecstasy
Story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/904770
Summary:
In a search for redemption, Jung Ra Im voluntarily gave up her dreams and passion, until she blindly believed in the benevolence of a demon in an angel form and fell into his diabolic design. Chosen as the prospective vessel, one in a billion, she was essentially nothing but a mere master plan for the bloodiest project of her abductors. While her faith, innocence and vulnerability were at stake, she rose against tyrannical immortals from hell that tainted both her heart and soul. In a world where a sick masochistic lion wouldn’t fall in love with a stupid lamb, she was ready to die as well as determined to survive. An eye for an eye, a tooth for a tooth, evil for evil—which demon would finally win the game: the one inside her or otherwise?

Genre: Adaptation, Alternate Universe, Supernatural, Reverse Harem, Dark, Romance, Psychological
Characters: Jung Ra Im (OC), EXO, characters from Anime "Diabolik Lovers"
Chapters: So far, 1 Prologue, 7 chapters (On-Going)
Reviewer: Any available reviewer is fine, especially the one who can tolerate the genre of my story.

Please take your sweet time that you need to review my story. Thank you very much for providing this service. God bless you all! ^^
b-a-b-o
#2
Chapter 13: thank you for such a lovely review! : )
Rai_Moore
#3
Chapter 11: thanks for the review :D
Minderaser
#4
Beta

Title: Marine

Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/833568/marine-under-editing-angst-romance-love-originacharacter-btsjin

Summary:

I won't let the opinions of others
consume my fragile heart
I won't let the opinions of others
slaughter my last bits of hope
I won't let the opinions of others
destroy my faith
I'll always wait for you
Cherish and think of you everyday
You are not lost nor forgotten
I love you
I believe in you
My love for you is eternal

Characters: Jin (BTS) and OC's

Genre: Angst and Romance

Chapters: Oneshot

What you want the beta-reader to focus most on: grammar especially sentence structure, character development and plot

Beta-Reader: wxnner
bae-jinki
#5
Chapter 12: Yay! And thank you for the review. It was actually Minho's father who Nayeon's mother was flirting with. As soon as I get my hands on a computer I will credit you and this shop
KangminBread
#6
review
title: Insanity
story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/817977
summary: Sungmin had been institutionalized when he was 10 because of post-traumatic delusions that started after his house burned when he was 8. At the age of 18 he was allowed back into society because his delusions were under control. He was no longer a harm to himself or the society. But the hunt for a serial killer had turned upside down every belief about Sungmin's insanity.
genre: , Supernatural, police thriler,
characters: Super Junior minus Siwon
chapters: 7
reviewer: my_taeng04