Chapter 1: I just died from second hand embarrassment, like for real, I cannot read this without putting my phone down and taking a deep breath for whatever Sehun would do next. Like, boiii, he can't get anymore obvious with how much he likes Minseok. And Minseok too, he might not be as obvious as Sehun, but how else would he be able to stand how creepy Sehun can get with all his staring and fanboying? Gotta also love all their "" friends - especially dear Kyungsoo, gotta love him lots, for never introducing them to each other.

Chapter 1: Oh. Oh Dear God. I need to hold onto something, wait-

DJDJSKDJJSJSKD *SCREAMS* I love everything about this fic. Jongin, Kyungsoo and Sehun being a dork and MINSEOK. SOCCER. DANCING most importantly the ending oh my god djfjdjskjdjdj thank you for writing this TT

Chapter 1: OHHHH ONE OF THE MOST ADORABLE XIUHUN FICS IVE EVER READ OMFG I LOVE THIS
tbh im having a hard time recollecting my thoughts to leave a long comment because the last part got me bla.king out because minseok is so sly and hes so fly and hes so cool oh my god hes sUCH A LITTLE I LOVE HIM HES SO SWEET AND ATTRACTIVE AND JUST SO COOL OMFG HES SO SMOOTH like asking sehun to come closer with the music being loud as an excuse but then kissing his cheek as a good job and kISSING SEHUN ON THE LIPS AS A CONFESSION. PERFECT ENDING
you would think that sehun being the over obsessed fanboy would actually confess first but then minseoK JUST BEATS HIM TO IT SEHUN JUST CANT WIN CAN HE
AAAHHHHH so perf
just gonna enumerate a few things i absolutely loved
sehun is crazy but hes also cute. but hes really crazy. luhan is a cute hyung omfg. kyungsoo is so apathetic bUT IM SURE HE CARES A LOT AND DEEP INSIDE HE MUST BE SO PLEASED WITH HIMSELF FOR AT LEAST CONTEIBUTING TO XIUHUNS DEVELOPMENT. jongin is an friend but thanks anyway dude and bro u the best. that kaisoo is cute too waaahhhh. and minseok is just. perf. kmn
TBH I CAN SO RELATE WITH SEHUN DURNG THAT WORKSHOP CLASS ON GRINDING BEC SERIOUSLY one second minseok is fluffy and squishy and tHE NEXT HES TEMPTATION AND SIN AND ILLEGAL AND kmn i feel so attacked. this was inspired by breaking machine in tlp right??? perf
AH OVERALL IF IT ISNT OBVIOUS YET I ENJOYED THIS FIC A LOT so thanks for writing and sharing <333

Chapter 1: LOOOOOL
that was cute, and funny xD fanboy Hun lmao

Chapter 1: kyaaaaaaaaaa they are so cuuuute!!!! these two are ridiculous lol. omg!!!! this xiuhun is so fluffy im gonna die!!! hewlp

Chapter 1: Awww, this is such an adorable story, so cute... :) I liked it.

This is so cuuuuuute♡♡

Chapter 1: omg perfect i love it. xiuhun is so adorable, the cute mathyung and the cool maknae ♡♡♡. fluffffffffffffy