☇ Second Chance ✕ A Cyborg Dystopia ✕Story Started!

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SECOND CHANCE

story by AlienFromMars

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We refuse to give up on what is ours.

 
 

author's note

AlienFromMars: 
Hihi! You can call me Mars :) So, I was actually inspired after reading this brilliant book which I can't remember the name of lol /slapped. Anyways, this is my first applyfic and I'm really looking forward to this. I do hope you will apply and I really should stop rambling on now omg. Bye! ◦°˚\(*❛‿❛)/˚°◦

 

updates

Feb 01 

Apply has been opened!

FEB 22 

Ay, so I've decided on a deadline for this. The deadline will be on  29 March 2015!

mar 02 
The cheatsheet has been updated, so do check it out!

mar 06 
Thank you to all my appliers so far! ଘ(੭*ˊᵕˋ)੭* ̀ˋ

Because I've received quite a few apps for the plotline of 'Tired', I have decided to close that plotline and won't be accepting anymore apps for it. But, if you've already started working on an app for 'Tired', just PM me!

mar 29 
Apply is finally closed! I won't be accepting anymore applications from now. Characters will be revealed soon, so good luck to everyone! ༼ つ ◕◡◕ ༽つ

apr 12
Characters have been revealed and the story will be starting soon!

It

is the year 2078, and aliens have invaded. Humanity is losing, and in a desperate attempt to drive the invaders out, the government has resorted to modifying people. New and improved, these part-machine, part-humans are smarter, faster, stronger and every bit the obedient and fearless soldier. 

 

Fast forward to 3078; humanity has done a great job trying to protect its home, but they have failed. Now, all that's left are shells of once magnificent cities and the remaining terrified survivors.

But there is still one last trick, rejected soldiers of a time long past. Frozen and in deep slumber for the last century, something has awoken them, and this time, they are determined to reclaim what is rightfully theirs.

 

title » Second Chance
author » AlienFromMars
genre » Action, Sci-fi
characters » TBA
disclaimer » There will be elements of violence, gore and same- relationships, so if that's not your style, the exit is to your left.
deadline » TBA

 

rules & regulations

one » You know the drill; suscribe or else you won't know if there's been any updates. Upvoting is very appreciating, but not necessary.
two » Commenting once every chapter or two is a must. Otherwise, your character might meet an unfortuante end. If you're going on hiatus, do remember to inform me.
three »You may reuse old apps, but make sure it's been edited to fit the story.
four » Read the cheatsheet very, very carefully. Also please follow it, it's there for a reason.
five » The total number of applicants I'll be accepting is not yet determined, but will be six or less. It depends on the number and quality of apps I receive. That being said, I will be having my own charcter in the story.
six » Please ask any questions you have before you submit your app. Remember to submit it at the turn-in and not here, otherwise, you will be rejected.
seven » Password is your favourite computer game. 
eight » You may apply more than once, but keep in mind that only one character of yours will be accepted, unless your app is EXCEPTIONALLY good.
nine »Bashing of any kind gets you an immediate rejection.

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spicea11347 #1
Chapter 12: Oh wow. I really miss this applyfic. I really hope you continue it, too. It's just so different and not something that's seen too often.
Also, a year late, but I hope your exam went well that you were working towards and what not.
-catalyst #2
Chapter 12: omg hi i just came back suddenly cause i read my app and wanted to check this out
yeah, this chapter is still perfect and you have nothing to worry about :D
also! i hope life is treating you well and you're getting lots of rest and having fun in general! :)
EllaQueLlora #3
Chapter 12: Awesome! You updated! Okay, first and for most, I LOVE YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATING!!!
Secondly, I think I legit did not thought that she would get physical with Jongin. Though I would've done the same if a dude come up all over my grill XD
Still, I love your writing, still on point and refreshing to read! ^_^ Can't wait to read the next chapter!
-catalyst #4
Chapter 12: THIS CHAPTER WAS PERFECT YOU HAVE NOTHING TO WORRY ABOUT
i mean, i completely understand one's own standards and trying to rewrite it but ending up with something not to one's standards. because that feeling is unpleasant ;; bUT THIS CHAPTER WAS PERFECT I CRY
jongin is such a dork omg. i can really feel the difference in their views of life and personalities i just love it ;u;
but otl i totally would not expect jongin to be the one setting all these cyborgs loose, although now i can totally see it hahahah
i also understand with your note about updating, so please take your time :)
and that master post seems like a good idea! but only if you have the time to do it ;u;
just so we all know what each character's part is in this story :)

thank you for the update! omg i loved it hahah
( minaaaaa i cry she's so sweet and motherly and i know this is my character and my app but still ;u; )
luinil #5
Chapter 12: omg i just realized i didn't comment on the first chapter even if i was totally sure i did D:
the first one was a rather funny chapter! especially the parts with daejin, omg, i like him but i'm pretty sure if i was rei i'd react in the same way, haha!
and i thought you said you're terrible at writing dialogues but it doesn't really seem so? at least, i find them entertaining and quite realistic?
and also, i can't imagine how high your standards are because for me this second chapter was very good? T^T

so it was because of jongin that daejin's door was open in the first chapter? :o jongin, you should be more careful! zhuqi is right when she calls him a moron, haha.
i'm really looking forward to the next chapter T^T and as long as the quality of the chapters is high (like it is right now honestly), it's okay if you don't update too often since you're busy! :D

oh, about the masterpost.. why not? if there are too many characters it could be useful, especially if they're original characters or idols not everyone might be familiar with...?
-catalyst #6
Chapter 11: I FINALLY HAVE TIME TO READ THIS LOVELY CHAPTER
( and read the last teaser too but you know. it was awesome like usual. )

first of all, i didn't expect this chapter to be so long! it's so nice!
second of all, your dialogue is great! there's nothing you need to change about anything ;u;
omg but i would totally be creeped out too if i suddenly looked and saw two open eyes staring back at me
like and what's with daejin hahahah
i love how he was just yelling at the box trying to wake up chanyeol and it wasn't really doing anything at all
i'm already loving the dynamics between these two
i'm excited to see how the rest will come together and fall into place :D
yowamushi #7
Chapter 11: aaaahh omg love this chapter so much! sorry for commenting late-
anyway, I think I've said it before, but I'll just say it again- I love your writing style!
don't worry about not writing much dialogue since you did a great job describing each moment and what the character is feeling, it's really beautiful.
and I love these two! rei and daejin will make /really/ good friends in the future. lmao.
I love how rei is scared shirtless over daejin's weird personality too!
looking forward for the next hero's introduction!
EllaQueLlora #8
Chapter 11: Omfg ASDFGHJKL!!! I've said it once and I'll say it again, you're one HELLUVA WRITER!! I was so engrossed in reading because of all the details you written! I'm in love with your writing basically babe!!! Can't wait to see who's next!!! Fighting author-nim!!
luinil #9
Chapter 10: i just realized i sent you the pm and didn't comment on the revelation chapter so i'm doing it now lol T^T
first thing first thanks for choosing yubin among the creativity plotlines! >_< i really thought she maybe was a bit too much but you likes her enough to choose her so omg thank you so much *^*
then, congrats to the other chosen ones! can't wait to see how all the characters will interact haha
and lol don't worry about the pictures!! they're cool!! *^* it's a better list than i thought haha!
eunmini #10
Chapter 10: my gawd!!! you really made my day I've been pretty sick these days and this just made it a lot better ^_^! congratz to the other chosen ones.. They are all soo good and of course thank you so much for choosing Aeyoung.. can I hug you?! //hugs anyways.. but really I can't for this story to take off!! It's going to be one hell of an adventure.. The edits are great! I really love how you put the effort into making this for us! I don't mind any of the extras.. it makes it even better ^^

it's totally okay don't worry about it. I want the two te end up together rather early. I'll pm you the rest ^_^!
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