Chapter 10: *screeches a wee bit* All these comments with Kyuhyun in it oh my dlskjfhaoug. [*A*] Thanks, guys~!
About the actual chapter though… I love love love how the characters were had very distinct personalities right from the get-go. Even the real survival shows can’t pull it off sometimes; everyone tends blends together until they each get a bit more screen time, but these guys are already showing their flavors. ’Tis beautiful~ *sniffles*
Daniel is such a thoughtful child awwww (though it makes me a bit sad that he’s thinking himself into a pickle here). His friendship with Seokbin makes so much sense—of course they would bond music, of course—and Daniel’s sadness is painfully realistic. It makes me wonder Seokbin is taking it, since he seems quite smiley and sweet, but the profile mentions “secretive” as one of his traits. Hmm…? * imaginary beard*
(Bonus points for blunt stylist, haha. Was that Kaji or someone else on the team?)
If Jinhyuk and Kyungjae really become Team Rocket, can Jaehyuk be Meowth? And can Hyunsoo be… I dunno, Nurse Joy? He seems very helpful and patient, both of describes Nurse Joy quite well, I think~ I’m really liking Jaehyuk, though; he’s like that friend who would wolf-whistle at a critical moment during a date, haha. Though of course, Jinhyuk’s dramatics are the icing on proverbial cake. The bokkes gotta have their tsukkomi, however pink-haired he may be~
Jaemiiiiiiiiiiii cutie pie come here. I wanna pet this kid, seriously. I’m a bit worried about the dancer and asthma combination, though; it’s manageable, but with the way these Kpop kids work, something sad might happen. [º~º]"
The rest of this monster comment is in the Replies to this one, because it got too long, haha
XDD lol daniel not wanting makeup
XDD i knew it
aww..yeah...this is whats painful about being in a survival show
XDD Jinhyuk i pity you
but pink is nice tho
serious..zelo in pink hair is my favourite hair colour XD
haih yeo kaji
yeah..its eye catching
XDD TEAM ROCKET OMG
yes, yes they are XDD
yeah of course they would do that, its buisness dear
mr. high IQ still trying to study before the show
i applaud you
awww thats sweet
though there is already a jay...dgna's Jay?
yeah thats smart kyuhyun
yeah thats what its always gonna be for the 1st ep
Chapter 10: The guy having an internal crisis because of the pink hair is killing me omg this dude's hilarious.
I'm also feelin for... Kyuhyun? The study one. He seems pretty chill, and the fact that he cared enough to quietly stop Joohyeon from his scratching despite the fact that Joohyeon isn't the friendliest guy shows that he's an extra care-y person on the inside. I like that. :')
I'm also liking this writing style a lot btw, it switched POVs often enough to get all the characters in but not so often that it was confusing or annoying. I was afraid I wouldn't be able to get attached to any of the characters cuz there's so many, but y'all are doing a nice job at getting everyone in. Looking forward to upcoming chapters!!
Chapter 9: Ayyy, the official lineup is here!! And apparently a prologue too, which I'm gonna go read now, wow I'm so sorry I haven't been online in so long and missed so much. Personal shizz. But I'm here now yo, hopefully it's still cool with y'all and my chara hasn't been booted off yet lmao.
Chapter 10: Team Rocket :') The contestants are so interesting and it's great to see them all in one chapter. I really like your writing style too. Kyunhyun why are you still studying haha
Thanks for the great chapter ♡
Chapter 10: Yeo Kaji is Song Hyunsoo right? when i was reading i had to keep going back to the profile overview haha
the younger kids are all visual! i would like to see the members make their cold maknae show aegyo haha that would be funny
kyuhyun is still studying at a time like this gee feels so stress for him.
Chapter 10: Yay!
Daehyun was one of lucky ones to go through that 'stylist' wrath. And I think you described his personality so well, kinda reminds me of Infinite's Sungyeol.
Sorry for Jinhyuk, with his pink hair but he should be in a group as Team Rocket with Kyungjae. Loving the story already!
Chapter 10: thanks for the update and the profiles! It really helped me get to know the different characters and it was interesting to see the dynamics of the characters. its nice to see that you managed to write in all the characters without making one character have a bigger part than the others. such an intense start, can't wait for more.
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