☑ snowflake16
Colloquial Mini Reviews ★ (╥﹏╥) ★ ☰ CLOSED28 STORY INFORMATION:
GENRES: horror, thriller, mystery, psychological
CHARACTERS: junhyung, kyungsoo, chunji, boa
CHAPTER COUNT: oneshot, complated
STORY DESCRIPTION: “Wilde Entertainment closes mysteriously. Ex-trainees suddenly begin suffering from hysteria. No one knows the cause of this epidemic. One by one they start to die. A special police unit is brought in to bring solace. Officer Yong Jun Hyung, attempts to solve the secret that lies behind the slogan: “Don’t Trust Anyone,” and endeavors to create a name for himself in the work field. An enigmatic detective is requested to join the quest. Who is the killer? What is his reason? Where is he hiding? And can Yong & Do stop him before it is far too late?”
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cheque mate story LINK | snowflake16 | FEB. 28, 2015
STRENGTHS:
(1) story characterization
perhaps the best part that i found was the story's characterization. first and foremost, let's talk about boa! it was actually pretty cliche to judge her as the culprit from the very beginning. i mean, the fact that you used a third person's pov had decreased her part of the story itself, not that i'm complaining since the pov was actually fitting, but yeah. it's pretty stereotypical to suspect her almost immediately, so i was really glad that she wasn't really the actual culprit. it was actually a good thing that she wasn't all throughout the story. that would've been too evident, and your point would've been very much confusing then.
as for junhyung... well, i can't really say much about him. i didn't love nor hate his character. he was just a normal man, who was really realistic, as you have mentioned in your explanation. even so, he wasn't the normal cliche character. he was rather a truly realistic character that most people can relate into. it was surely comforting to see him struggle with contrasting stuff and whatnot, bec. that's a part of life as well, an
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