Chapter 1: hi author!
chapter 1 : The description of the scenes and the plot were really good! However, it's better to have the story abit longer! It seems as if the story had a beginning but without an ending. The WHOLE story is worth to be developed into a brand new story instead of a one shot. I hope you can consider my suggestion and make your story even better!
this is completely random but I found it funny (maybe just me and my oddball sense of humour eek) but the girl on the HisSmile cover is actually a popular Chinese manhua artist aged 30!! (the awkward irony how she's coincidentally paired with a minor in the graphics aha) She looks so so young though; true definition of aging youthfully haha anyways, that aside.. The fic was such an enjoyable read! 請寫多多TFBOYS的小説!加油呀!
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