In Critical

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Jun blanched. "This really is a small world." 

 

"Seems like your fates are tied together." 

 

 

 

 

A story including Starbucks, Hearts, and Following Your Dreams

 

 

Word count: 8,136

 

Foreword

"Bommie!" Minzy yelled, shaking me out of my thoughts. "I have your latte!" She teetered over, holding two steaming paper cups in either hand.

"Careful!" I warned, and grabbed the cup out of her hand before she could drop it and cause a scene. I pivoted on my heels, only to crash into someone. I gasped as the lid popped off, and spilled all over the tall stranger. He had dyed auburn hair that was long, covering his eyebrows. He looked normal, the typical mama’s boy, except for the single diamond glinting from one ear. He was my age, and obviously in shape. No doubt he had a lot of popularity in whatever school he attended.

"Ohmagawd sorry!" I exclaimed, wide eyed at the mess I created.

"Ow, that burned." he hissed, as he peeled the sweater off of his skin.

I turned and grabbed a large handful of napkins. I handed half them to the man.

"I'm so sorry!" I said, and squatted to wipe up the mess on the floor. I threw away the used napkins. "I'll pay to have your burn treated."

The man coughed. "It's uh, fine. It doesn't need to be treated. I just need to change clothes."

"I-I'll pay to have your sweater dry cleaned too." I stammered.

He laughed. "Really, it's fine. This is old anyway."

I smiled, thankful at this stranger's kindness. I grabbed a napkin though, and scrawled down my name and phone number. I handed it to the man. "If you ever change your mind, just call me. I'll send over the money."

The man lifted an eyebrow. "Well thanks," he looked down at the napkin, "Bom Park. We have the same last name. It's nice to meet you. My name's Jun Park"

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Credits to: Katakatica for this beautiful poster ^^~

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KHS @ Steph's Review Bookshop for the review ;) thank you~

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/792803/106/steph-s-bookclub-review-shop-batch-4-closed-finishing-requests-revamping-apply-review-hiring-reviewer-reviewshop

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springmania
#1
It's great! hope you'll write another park bom story!
bigminiworld
#2
Chapter 1: aww... this is the only story that made me smile warmly at the ending :) love it!
goodluck2you #3
Chapter 1: Ahw what a sweet story. It's kind of sad but I liked it! ^^
kheosena
#4
I read this for a review but this was asdfjkl; ^^
syayuuri #5
Chapter 1: Thank god I stumbled upon this story. This is so beautifully written with the roller coaster feelings I've to feel. Thank you for this amazing story. Good job dear author.
BommiXXI #6
Chapter 1: I love this! I hope you write more stories in the future!
permatang #7
Chapter 1: woah... good job author nim.. it's different from other stories but i loved it.. i' m not familiar with infinite.. but i was happy to find this story..
jiebom
#8
Chapter 1: Wow I just found this story..the story line is different..well I'm sad at first but knowing that Bom really happy to donate her heart and that the accident is not intended I'm feeling better..huhu..but maybe you should tag this story to parkbom as I found it because of bom tag.. thanks for the great story