Entry #2

Blue-inked Fingers
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                 One More Night

 

The moon shines bright tonight

Up with the stars in this lonely night.

I want to hold you tight, now that I'm feeling blue.

I wish to be with you, hoping this nightmare isn't true.

 

With just one shallow mistake, you left my side.

With just one mistake, you left our ride.

Without listening to me, you turned your back.

Without hearing me, you never looked back.

 

Please stay with me, one more night.

For ever since you left all I did is to sigh.

If your decision will be the same, then say goodbye.

But please just stay with me for one more night.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Raemi-ya #1
Chapter 10: wooaa~~ i like it >3<
Bookworm01
#2
Chapter 9: I only read your poems today (sorry, a bit busy). I think they're good but I see a few typos in some (like jem, instead of gem). I'm hoping you'll fix them. Anyway, I don't really care about typos but I just wanted to tell you, in case you wanted to correct them.
I felt your disappointment and frustration when you told us about BTS' concert in Manila and how you didn't get to go. That girl to whom your grandfather gave the ticket is very lucky. She received a F-R-E-E SVIP ticket! That's something. Well, at least you and your grandfather might have helped someone. Malay mo po, medyo gipit sa pera iyong babae na iyon at ang libreng ticket na yun ay nakatulong sa kanya. ;-)
SOSHIkath #3
Chapter 7: Daesung ba to?xD Short yet ramdam ko yung emotion mo. LOL. Hallo!
SOSHIkath #4
Chapter 4: read it. =)