Leader, Lead Vocalist — 001 Main Vocalist — 001 LEAD DANCER, VOCALIST, FACE OF THE GROUP — 000 MAIN RAPPER, MAIN DANCER, VOCALIST — 002 VOCALIST, MAKNAE — 002
author's note — Here is where I'll be reviewing your character.
plotline — Vocalist, Maknae face-claim — Yuiri Murayama love interest — Jackson from GOT7
review — Thank you for applying. There's only one thing that I find wrong is that the love interest age difference is 5 years and yours is 6. So neither your love interest or back-up love interest can be chosen. If you change her love interest then you'll be accepted.
plotline — Vocalist, Maknae face-claim — Eunji from APink love interest — Leo from VIXX
review — Thank you for applying and sorry about the long wait. I will say that I liked your app but I did find some errors. Please write more in the personality section and also write out the traits (writing out the traits helps me out a little more; at least 3 positive personality traits and 3 negative ones). I liked how you used 1st but please write in 3rd person. It's just easier for me. Also explain her trainee life a little more. So it's at least 2 sentences. Once you fix those, your character will be accepted.
plotline — here face-claim — here love interest — here
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plotline — here face-claim — here love interest — here
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I have fixed the minor error - changing her love interest to Jackson.
Thank you for noticing it, I was kinda blur that time and thinking Sungjong was 94 instead of 93. Lol.
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