Gui Feng: The Imposter

Description

What happened when Xia Tian, Lan Ling Wang, and Meng Zhu went to transfer power to Wang Da Dong, Wang Ya Se, and Ding Xiao Yu? When the three lost their powers, they had forgotten that Le Ke Si had needed his back as well. During the transfer, something goes wrong. Xia Yu's Gui Feng is released, and escapes from Dong Cheng Wei. Da Dong and his friends must search for him before any damage can be done. When Lei Ke Si goes to his home, he is kidnapped by a powerful Yi Neng Xing Zhe, and Gui Feng takes his place as Da Dong's friend, but he cannot hide forever.

Foreword

Below is a sample of part of a chapter in the story:

   Another blast of the fiery, green energy lights up the room, and beyond it as someone shoves the wooden door open. Da Dong enters slowly as the light bulb shatters, making the place pitch black. He can only make out two shapes, one standing up in front of him. The other shape is several feet away from the other, lying down. “Lei Ke Si? Are you there?” Da Dong asks.

     Nothing. He edges forward, until he knocks into a warm body. “Lei Ke Si?” he asks again. “Why aren’t you responding? Hello?”

     A cold, wet hand grasps Da Dong’s wrist, the fingers clasped tightly, and quite strong. He gives a small yelp of surprise, and wrenches away. The person in front of him breathes heavily, and there is this strange sound. Then a shuffle follows. A light is switched on, revealing a bizarre scene, at least to Da Dong. 

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I thought it would have been interesting to watch what happened for transferring the powers, so I am writing this story as after 'The X Family'. In addition, they did overlook Lei Ke Si using his powers. The characters Xia Yu, Wang Da Dong, and Lei Ke Si will be used most often in this story. This is basically PG-13 for some blood (probably a little more than the vital fluid coming from the mouth) and violence. The genre are Fantasy/Action/Thriller. Comedy I will attempt, however, humor is not my strong point. I will do my best! :D

Disclaimer: I do not own The X Family, KO One, the dimensions, nor their wonderful characters. Thank you to whoever reads this!

Julia Winters :)

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PureForestGuardian
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Chapter 4: Hi!

Okay, so first, I really have to thank you for writing this - I recently finished watching "The X-Family," and I was slightly annoyed that we didn't get to see the power-exchange. And while I know Lei Ke Si wasn't the best person, I would have liked to see him included as well.

That said, you have a very interesting idea here. I thought it was interesting that in a way, Gui Feng was still trying to protect Xia Yu in the beginning...and I do think it would be much like him to want to fight Lei Ke Si (to gain control over his body?) But the idea that Lei Ke Si /wasn't/ just brainwashed is very intriguing...

All in all, good job so far! ^^