The Hibiscus Flower

Description

Ok Taecyeon is an Earth Elemental. He tends the earth and nurtures it to weave and create all sorts of flora used by magicfolk all around the world. However, his passion are flowers. Why? Because the person who embodied his happiness loved them most of all, and they were taken. Unmoving and hopeful to one day see him again, Taecyeon established himself as an expert in his field - based on a promise made to his special person. One day, a flicker of purple wings catches his attention, a small visitor has arrived. A small butterfly, with wings the colours of Byzantium, and an aura so familiar, he can’t help but feel connected.

Foreword

"Happiness often sneaks in through a door you didn't know you left open."

Two chapters (because I can never do things simply...), second chapter is rated.

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milkyboy_khun #1
Chapter 2: Ohmygod ... This ... This ... Omg its sooooo sweeeeeet!!!!!! Chanana is a (?) different person? What was is ... A ... O.O forgot ...
They are so cute together (though I strongly ship TaecKhun, hehe) and Channie is so sweet in this fic, Taeccie too :D
omg I can imagine Taecyeon with green eyes ... Its ... Weird. O_o
and Chansung with purple eyes? ... Ehm ... Kinda strange but "pretty".
Chanana you are so coooooooool ... Taecyeon with flowers??? *Dies of laughter* ohmygod ... That's sooo *maybe* funny ... The big *tho dorky* manly beast of 2PM growing pretty little flowers. I know ... I like it in this fic, but still ... Kekekekeke ^_^
mbk
sooooooooooooo sweeeeeet and fluffehhhh ... Omg my feels ... Keke. Well done authornim this is GREAT!!
BluSyndrome #2
Chapter 2: Oh my gods, stop ruining My otps authornim!!!!!!! Also I'm so glad magical taecsung got a little more action than pirate taecsung, I don't know how I would have handled it otherwise
xeodox #3
This was absolutely beautiful. I can't put into words how much I adored this. <3
-Yuan- #4
So here I finalyl mad eit to the comment section. Not that I haven't read this at least twice.
Its a master piece and it so loveable beautiful. I love ho wyou took the time about the flower meaning and just because you surely didn't get half the credit you deserved on it. That one above thousend reasons your writing is special because you do take your time to research things you don't know and its cleraly shows because it makes your story so realistic.
I love th fact that taecyeon was an earth elementar, because seirously they aren't enough storie sabout ti, and I love how you made created a very special kind of earth elementars. I mean they aren't the popular elements, if they are stories about elements than we mostly have fire, water, sometimes air and or ice.
Earth is mostly the lame one, the one that is forgotten, because its soft' yet strong. And it kind of couvers a lot of topics which we daily kind of face. Like racism, or how we ened to take care, how the place you live you stay at can affect your health, those aren't fantasy topic but real once, perfectly covered in a beautiful world you cant help but being pulled in.
babykhun #5
Chapter 2: how sweet, beautiful, amazing story I've just read. I loved the fact that it was fanatasy the most, and their making love scene!! The flowers, trees and all the colors in this made me fall deeply in love with it. Thank you for this wonderful story <3
missterious #6
Chapter 2: gahhh so lovely! you're so creative!
i have questions! i didn't quite grasp the 'heather' references near the end. can you explain?
and what inspired you to use 'eden lines' (as opposed to calling them anything else)?
sweetsweat #7
Chapter 2: So beautiful! I was overwhelmed by the amount of flowers and fields and colors I imagined.. And by the first chapter being so filled of a never dying yearning, and the second showing a growing happiness <3 The scene with them in the grass, in the field though >////< Pure bliss, can't get over how hot and organic and amazing that was <3333
-Tigress- #8
Chapter 2: Oh wow okay this was superbly beautiful. It's so sweet and well put together and ugh. I love it. <3
HwangAhRa #9
Chapter 2: This is truly a beautiful and amazing story. I'm sorry it took me days to be able to finally read it and leave a comment.
It's me, the lucky girl to receive this wonderful story. I couldn't believe my own eyes at first. I've told you several times, but not enough, how much i admire your work so naturally, when i clicked on your story and saw my prompt on your foreword it was magic. Like a little kid you're giving the perfect present to. I'm so honoured..

You made such a wonderful story with the few words I gave you as a prompt. I love every single thing about it. The past and the present mixed together, the deep feelings Taecyeon has for Chansung and his will to keep his promise no matter what. There's a thing he says in the first chapter when Chansung came back that speaks for your entire story i think. Healing together. That's how strong and beautiful their bond is. I love Taecyeon's mind as a grower. Even if the father isn't really 'present' in the story you can feel his influence throughout the hole story and how Taec has the same respect and love for all things. Overall i love how the father is still an important character and what you made him into, always being there for Taec, his pillar in some way? I could talk about every details of your story for hours. I've read it twice already and i know i'll read it again. It has the same calming and soothing effect as Chansung's aura on Taec. But i don't want to bother you i think i've wrote enough for now.

Thank you. Really.
You're one of the best author out there and you gave me more than i could ever dream of with this gift.
poisoncheecks #10
Chapter 2: ahhhh Sam! this is very beautiful <33333
i love it you made them into magical creature, not just normal random people i used to read <3
the hurt and longing in both of them were so intense! who request for this fic is very lucky to get u to write it for her/him >u<

the way they comfort and held each other for strength are very strong <3 loving every bit of them in this fic!
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