Chapter 1: Lovely story. I really enjoyed it!

Chapter 1: I know said I shouldn't read but I had too after you brought up ghee. And i have to disgaree you totally captured me from
the first sentence on. As you know i don't know either of them well thoigh both kind of give me an image it wouldn't be thpically a vouple i would enjoy reading about. however i did enjoy this. and not because it was barely coulely but because i liker the dynamic and the flow. I wavered a bit at lunas part. she wasn't as smoothly written as sugar and felt a little flatter and less thought trough. it however matched because she came from this pretty life and kets be honest extreme welathy people can be a little shallow (not all of course but if captured in a golden cage) so it wasn't off outting but their was just less to her. Like you introduce suga we knew why he was good in climbing (teough his childhood) we knew about his character a good bit but that all was missing for luna, this totally empathizes that she may not have had a very thrilling live that has allowed her to build
her own character. which is on one way great to portray the shalowness of the world but makes it hard for the reader to empathise with her. So like rather then repeatedly point out how she was just money i her uncles eyes and how awful her giance was here it would have been better to set examples or show not tell. Also the cashcow felt out of place like i was confused if she was sold of for money or connection. it felt it mixed and that would be okay but their was no clear line. So it was harder to root for her and her desire for freedome. the ending felt a bit rushed. lile it would have been nice how they might have destroyed the efidenced of her past life (the dress) or yongis parents at leash. because even if she was an undesirable didn't they still do a crime with treepassing and wouldn't they still want to punish yoongi? i mean obviously if they didn't saw his face they couldn't know or find him but it would be wise to get ride of evidence neitherless no?
also that the guards weren't more present on the way back. they should be panicking and searchibg for him and this moght have been their chance to pass trough the gate or climb bacl but the gate would be more belivable since she probably never climbed. but those thibgs are really minor because it doesn't really tool away reading enjoyment. and all in all it was a solid great story that i really loved and enjoyed to read. best evidence for it i'm still awake and not sleepy despite it just pass 2 am here.
Do thinks i loved the most where how you set up yoongi, we (reader) understood and felt similar to his curiosity. the hints how he felt for her and how she was aware but not taken aback or adhamed. impying that she knows her worth. i love that because it makes it more belivable for het to run. she knows she deserves better. and yongis parents reaction in the backflash as well as when she came home even though only brushed as they are secondary to the story they gave more depths an reality to it.
so thank you cery much for writting and sharing it certainly was an very inspiering read and i also loved the morality topic of today society it brushed. i loved how in the end it makes you overthink your own matrialsm and choices and lingers as more then just another love story which makes this so great. devinitively one of my favorite stories so far, though i think you can do a lot better it's perfect for a short story!

since i wrote this from my phone they are probably a lot of typos i'm sorry about that.
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Chapter 1: I really liked this! Hoping for a sequel!

Chapter 1: Luna and Suga pairing is so refreshing and funny enough I actually ship these two way before this fanfic (wth they have no legit moments ever and I am only open to the idea because 93 liner). I enjoy this story. Money does not buy one happiness and being less than the rich does not make you pitiful at all. Love is greater than anything in this world.

Chapter 1: Ughh.. O.O I never thought about Suga and Luna together TT^TT You proved me wrong. This is so ... I don't know what to say, but, I. Loved. It! =^3^=

Chapter 1: This was such a beautiful story! It's the first time I've read a story with a Luna x Suga pairing and they look great together! :D Thank you author-nim!

Chapter 1: I like it- a fluffy oneshot was just what I needed today :)

You are always making me reconsider ships! :) <3

Chapter 1: I really loved this story. Sure, it was cute and a little nerve wracking with the forbidden garden like thing, but it also helped us to see that there's way more to life than money and social games and other BS. And like Yoongi, we should be thankful for the freedom and blessings we already have <3

Chapter 1: *flails some more* It gets better with a second read through! lol

Totally loved the way it played out and I think you nailed Yoongi and Luna's characters. Nice play with Yoongi and his laziness, though the climbing ability was entertaining for sure. The back story you gave us for him as a child was hilarious! And pretty much all of his interactions with Luna when they were climbing. I cracked up with his thinking when he was following her. Oh dear. Poor blushing baby. But that's what made it so funny. haha

I'm also so happy with the way you wrote Luna too. I can totally see her rebelling against that sort of life and I appreciated that little spark of defiance, even if it didn't entirely manifest. Her fiance is an . I guess he's a product of his world for sure but damn. I would have wanted to escape too. How fortuitous that Yoongi was there and wholly unable to keep himself from being 'helpful'. lol I had lots of favorite lines here but I think I really enjoyed the line with "then he found himself doing possibly the most stupid thing he'd ever done in his life." XD So true but the possibilities afterwards are amazing! heh

The climb was tense and breathtaking and I appreciated his attempt (mostly successful) in catching her. And then his parent's reactions were priceless. I like his mom. heh :) It also makes sense the following morning and you really hammered the point home with Yoongi's introspection. Very well done overall and I am more than pleased! Thank you so much again! <3 You are awesome!

This story looks very intriguing=).