The Princess Treatment

My Bitter Cupcake

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Bookworm01
#1
Chapter 3: Okay, I don't mean to complain or anything but on this chapter, I noticed that Yoona pointed at Jessica's new co-worker, "Lehun." Was that supposed to be Sehun, Luhan or neither? It was a mix of both names so I was confused on who you were referring to.
As for the pace, maybe it's going a bit too fast. If I was Jessica, I would simply grin at the comment but turn away. I can't hate someone I don't know nor can I love him...yet. Maybe it would be better if the previous chapter, You Look Cute, would've been set a few weeks after they worked together or something. Maybe even 3-4 days? It just went a bit too fast on that part so I wanted to tell you about it. Anyway, besides that, this is great!
fanfan109 #2
yah!! Another update kumao author nim!! ^Σ^
fanfan109 #3
omooo good story!!!