Beautiful story ?

Chapter 1: I want moooore. This feels like a prologue. Trust me, I won't mind more of this :)

Chapter 1: I feel that this is like a sneak peek...like there's a lot more to tell... I wish to know more about them, but of course no pressure ;) It's really good, I'm thankful that wonkyu shippers have so many good fanfics writers, and you one of them :D

I like it!! I like how the story reveals the relationship bet siwon and kyuhyun...esp the wiggling bum...ooopppsss...haha

Chapter 1: ohhh~~ this is sooo cute!! The intense word and stares glares....and then the lovey dovey back-huggy touchy feely...kekekeke
Hope you'll continue...but if not... thanx for the fic ^_^

Chapter 1: This is so good fluff underlined with impending gloom there is an urgency to love each other as much as time allows

Chapter 1: this is more like the beginning not the end cos to me it doesn't end until they comeback from war SAFELY

Chapter 1: Omg i need more of MAJOR CHO and LT COL CHOI, like MOREEEEEEE pls Authornim.

Chapter 1: You shouldn't left the ending like that *pouts* u know most of wonkyu fans are erts right hahahaha

Chapter 1: i would love more of this!