You've Fixed My Broken Heart

Description

This is a short story..I made it for 30 minutes because my friend asked me to make her a project so I really need your comments ASAP..She's going to submit it tomorrow..So I'm hoping for your comments and help..please!!!^_^

 

Characters:

Gui Gui

Aaron

Ya Tou

Wang Zi

Foreword

"Love is not always a compromise, 

Sometimes it's a complete surprise."

 

Love really comes in an unexpected time and way.

Sometimes, we are not aware

That even the foolish things that we do,

Can be a way for love to bloom.

Comments

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sweety_guilun #1
That was so cute! hahah<br />
Guigui, you made the right decision! haha<br />
You chose Aaron over Wang Zi!<br />
azure_bliss
#2
It's soooooo CUTE!<br />
No more words! It's CUTE!<br />
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA*Currently smiling like an idiot*<br />
Write more things cute! Love it soooo much!
GuiLunForever24
#3
so good!!!it's awesome!
lilmizzy024 #4
,, I'll try to rewrite and make it a bit longer after our research paper defence ..^^<br />
,,thank you for the comments..it's very helpful..keke ^_^<br />
OhItsYing
#5
It's quite good!!
apple23 #6
Is greet not great and nice story.. bt kinda rush and nt enough details for one shot. Need more for guilun parts. In the story i understands more of ya tao personality and characteristic rather than aaron
Bubble
#7
Oh Goshhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!<br />
I love this story so much :DDD <br />
But why it's so short T__T grrr how I wish it is longer -.- <br />
I hope you will write more about guilun XD <br />
I really love them so much hehe ^___^<br />
Add oil^^
lilmizzy024 #8
,,ohh..yeah..sorry about the wrong spelling and grammar..keke..^^ it's a little bit rush so I don't have enough time to correct the grammar and spelling.. Anyway..thank you for your comments.. I really appreciate it...Really really thank you..^^<br />
I'll try to write more Guilun stories..^^
FlamingFrog
#9
OMG!!! Your story is awesome! :D<br />
I love how you make Gui say that WangZi is the one who threw her hear away and Aaron's the one who pick it up and put it back together! <br />
Write more GuiLun stories k?
MelonCandy #10
Aww that was a really cute story!!! I loved the concept so much keke there some spelling and grammar mistakes, but you write really well! ^^