Chapter 1: Again, so on-point with the characterization! I love Donghyuk's long spiel about being worried and how apt his description of YG is, and how Bobby smoothly puts his worries to rest.. <3 I also squinted really hard and saw BinHwan, so yay! Also, Yunhyeong and Junhoe! I laughed at the imagery you provided about evil maknaes gathering together to make their hyungs' lives hard.. :) Kudos!
Chapter 1: wow... the story was perfectly written, like WOW !
it was awsome since the ship was my fav, and at the same time the way you described the characters and their feelings was GEE, was super cute!
i just wanna thank you again, and hope you'll write more of this ship! wonderful ♡
Chapter 1: Good story. I like how you describe their relationship. But i hope you write more BobbyDonghyuk lovey dovey moment haha..
Keep writing! Fighting!
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