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Why can't you see me?

Why can't you notice me?

Why don't you know me?

Why is life so unfair?

Foreword

Hi Dapeuni here! It's base on my fangirling experience, Hope y'all like it! Enjoy! :)

*credits to the gif used*


STORY WRITTEN BY Dapeuni | Oct. 27, 2014


 

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Bookworm01
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Chapter 1: I think, to answer your question/s, we chose to be a fangirl of our idols. One way or another, it was a choice. It may have been brought on by peers, sheer curiosity or something else but it was a choice we have made as people. It was voluntary. We were not forced to do anything yet we did it anyway. I believe it's because we've grown attached to the idols we admire. We may have developed a crush or an infatuation for them that will fade over time but, no doubt, they'll remain in our hearts and minds as the people we admired.
Also, if you think about it, idols see too many people every day but they don't remember them because they're not as close to us, their fans, as they are to the people they know. To them, we're practically strangers. Sad, but true.

Now, I'd like to comment on the story itself. It's very short but it delivers a message to which all devoted fans can relate. For me, length doesn't matter, as long as your intentions were executed well, it doesn't matter. I'm not a big fan of correcting people since I know that others have a good reason for their mistakes but I just wanted to point out 2 typos from this sentence:

Don't you know that I'm the one who stays ip all night just to be updated, to tweet an blog about you?

The ip should've been up, right? The tweet an blog should have been tweet and blog, right? I think you'd probably already seen that but didn't have enough time or something so I'd leave it alone for you to fix later. I just wanted to point it out.

Sorry if I offended you in any way with this comment. So so sorry! I didn't mean to offend or discourage you if I did in anyway. I also apologize if I angered you or something. I know that some people don't like being corrected but I just wanted to point it out.

Thank you for reading my comment.