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Jason a successful student in high school he’s is what you called the talk of the town he was popular and very well known in appearance and in brain. He went through his high school with just his looks, everyone wanting him and lusting for this young make he stood 6’0 tall with blonde hair and bangs that cover his crystal blue eyes. His body well built and strong and his stomach with six packs. He took great pride in himself, growing up in such a wealthy family him the way he was especially since he was raise by himself but always judge by his parents even when they weren’t around. He wasn’t the only child but always left alone he had 3 older sibling. Jason didn’t mind being alone but always wanted someone to himself someone who didn’t want him for his money or his looks but someone that wanted him for him and his actual personatilit. But he did have one person in his life that he could call his so called friend his name Jeremy ,Jeremy is just one year younger then Jason even so they had always done and went everywhere together. Jeremy stood 5’6 with a very slim body and tiny waist he had Brown hair and brown eyes he was always so much smaller then Jason but Jason was always there to protect Jeremy from anyone that wanted to pick on his best friend Jeremy ,he knew Jeremy since he was a kid . Jeremey was the neighbor kid, like Jason, Jeremy is from a wealthy family but unlike Jason’s family, Jeremy’s family were around for him and spoiled him whenever they could. It always made Jason feeling he was a part of something every time he was over at their home.  But once Jason graduated   from high everything changed, it was the begin of a new life lesion he just wasn’t prepare of what was coming to him.

 

Late nigh before Jason First day at college’; the two young male at Jason house in his room

 

Jeremy; “I cant believe your going to leave for so called college!”

Jason; “Well I could take you but your to tiny people might think im taking a middle schooler with me” he laughed as he threw a crashed up paper ball at Jeremy messing around with the younger male

Jeremy: “Your so mean, just wait and see next year im going to college  and your going to be the one begin to go to school with me” he stuck his tongue out at him

 

Jason; “Well if that’s the case then we all know that the world will end” he chuckled as he sat down on the floor in silent thinking to himself about his future and how his life is suppose to be. “Do you think becoming a lawyer is for me?”

 

Jeremy; “You already know that the only reason why your choosing that as your career is because you want to make your parents happy when no matter what you do they don’t notice anything you do. I say you go follow your dreams and do whatever you want , your really smart and a good person”

 

Jason : “well I don’t know what im really supposed to do. Ill see maybe being a lawyer will be fun” he laughed “maybe locking up people and charging them ridicules price won’t be so bad”

 

Jeremy; “Your such a strange person I wonder to myself why I speak to you” he chuckled as he got up and began stretching out “Well I have to go home before your parents get all crazy “

 

Jason; ‘Oh you better leave then cause then their precious little angle might lose his pretty little beauty sleep for school tomorrow “ he laughed as he threw his pillow at Jeremey’s face

 Jeremy:” SHUT UP!!!” he blushed I embarrassment “that’s the last time im telling you what my parents tell me” once he got hit by the pillow he threw it back at Jason and walk out the room going downstairs and running out going to his house next door but not before looking back at his friends house .

 

THE next following day; “First day of school”

 

Jason running into the building in rush looking at every door bumping into people looking all around very clueless trying to find his first class.

“! Why didn’t I get the tour like normal person” he finally  found his class with only on mintuine to space he quickly open the door with all his force not knowing what was on the other side once he open it he had dragged other person out who was holding and planning to open the door from the inside she was dragged out in complete surprised  her eyes widen as her body was through as the door open

 

Jason; “ ! Im so sorry I didt even know you were there” he quickly went to the young lady’s help holding his hand out for her he didn’t know any of this was going to happen once he took a glimpse of her he was felt something she was adorable she had long black hair ,big green eyes and such a soft sweet lips he “lets  me help you”

She reached out to him  but quickly got up didn’t really say much as she quickly remember class just began she didn’t pay attention to the other male and went straight into the class room taking her sit before roll call

 

Jason “Oh class!” he quickly went in after her taking a front row seat since it was the only seat left everyone else had taken the seats in the back where he wanted and always sat he sigh as he quickly sat down waiting for roll call until he hear a familiar voice it was the young lady’s . So her name is Eliza

 

Eliza’; “Here!” she rose her hand up as she was bit mad at what happened just a few seconds ago thinking to her self,  who does that kid thing he is hmp she thought to her self that he was so mean for doing that to her especially on her first day of class she then look at him from far behind noticing how cute he was she blushed as she remember his smile and his crystal blue eyes she couldn’t help but find him attractive every second she continue to look at him until she heard his name being called

 

Jason; ”HERE!” he groan soft to himself trying to pay attention to the rest of the class wanting the day to end already

 

3-Hours Later

Class has ended as the professor spoke reminding everyone that their first assignment is due the following class session and no late work. Ever student had gotten up and left the class room except for Jason taking his time putting his things away as he yawn in A very. Lazy movement  Until he heard A very squeaky noise coming From behind he quickly turned around noticing it was the girl from before she look furious her cheeks A dark red color with her index finger in front of his face he chuckled as he just couldn’t take the younger female serious he spoke softly with A smile

 

Jason;” woan! Girl calm down I cant understand anything your saying you sound like a little chipmunk” he chuckled at the younger_ female

 

 

Eliza;” I don’t sound like a Chipmunk” she blushed in embarrassment Trying not to, but her face said it all her cheeks grew more and more warm speaking to herself on how she couldn’t line this guy even if he was dreamy and very well groomed

 

Jason; “Ok, well I’m sorry about early even though it wasn’t my fault but I guess I’ll be the better person and say I’m sorry” he couldn’t help but to laugh

 

Eliza,;” I’ll except your apology for now” she quickly crossed her arm together her face still a dark red color trying her best to keep herself together from an embarrassment trying not to shudder

 

Jason; “okay? Whatever makes you happy I have more important things to do then to make you happy” he laughed as he stuck his tongue out at her playfully quickly turning around as he walked off

 

Eliza didn’t like his child action as she stomped her feet furiously walking behind  him stepping on the back of her feet the moment she did she gracefully regretted it, she blushed even mpr then before as her eyes widen “umm…” she froze in shocked trying to figure out what to do next , especially not knowing what Jason was going to do to her “IM SORRY”

 

Jason; “what in the world” the minute he felt her shoe hit the back of his he quickly turned around seeing her right behind him he didn’t know what to do , so he in some air speaking in a loud voice  making such an evil and made face as he slipped out a soft “BOOO!”

 

Eliza thinking Jason would scream or yell the minute she saw his face she screamed in fright trying to walk backwards but ended up on the ground embarrassed that she got scared just by a simple word she blushed harder she was red as a tomato

 

Jason couldn’t help but laugh at her reaction he got down extending his hand out to her “you’re just too funny, how about we go get something to eat and call it even ”

He smiled softly at her showing off his bright blue eyes and bright white smile.

 

2 WEEKS LATER

Jason has been seeing Eliza everyday after class and everything is going the way Jason expect he has grew strong feeling for this girl he is now at Jeremy’s house sleeping over.

 

Jason :” Jeremy I really want you to meet this girl”

 

Jeremy; “UGH! I can’t believe you’re still talking to that girl why don’t you just her and it over with it”

 

Jason; “I cant just do that, it’s not high school. Plus she’s different” he sigh as he threw his entire body on Jeremy’s bed laying down looking up at the ceiling as a soft smile come across his face

 

Jeremy; “Jason , don’t be so girly maybe she’s just using you,  don’t feel like she’s good for you” he said as he sigh looking away until he felt Jason through himself on his bed he then try pushing Jason off his bed playfully

“Jason! Get your fatass off my bed!!!! Your suppose to sleep on the floor”

 

Jason laughed as he let his weight fall becoming lazy to move his body “ill sleep on the floor if you can push me off”he knew Jeremy didn’t have the strength to do so he stuck his tongue out as he grabbed a pillow sleeping on his side “just give up Jeremy im going to sleep here and there’s nothing you can do about it!”

 

Jeremy blushed softly at Jason’s comment crossing his arm puffing his cheeks even though he knew Jason couldn’t even see him, he sigh softly as he sat there briefly, softly kicking the back of jason’s  until he realized Jason really did fall asleep

 

Jeremy; ”Jason?....” he whispered softly hoping the young male would still be into a deep sleep , once he was reassured he was, jermey got up from the bed siting down next to jason’s face softly his hair from his face looking at his entire face thinking to himself how he could love someone so much and not be able to tell them, not being able to even show him how much he truly felt because if he would then his relationship with his bestfriend would be no more. Just thinking about not having Jason in his life hurt him deeply, a tear dropped from Jeremy’s eye as he sniffed trying to control himself from his feelings he then got up leaning forward placing his hand on jason’s cheek as he brushed his thumb over his lips softly as he bit down his own lower lips telling himself  this isn’t right he lean forward close up to jason’s lips until he heard a knock on the door that made his heart beat rapidly he quickly pulled himself away tripping over his own feet making loud noise but not loud enough noise to wake Jason up Jeremy realized it was just his mother at the door asking if everything was alright in there

 

Jeremy ;”Go away mother im trying to sleep!!”

He blushed softly as he knew this was a close called he couldn’t let anything like this happen again, he quickly got up getting back into his bed as he slide right behind Jason laying his head next to jason’s back as he smiled softly inhaling the scent of jason’s colon he then snuggled up against him softly wrapping his arms around him knowing Jason wouldn’t even feel anything since he was a heavy sleep just having him so close to him for one night made his heart feel so warm and his stomach full of knots if this how he felt with just a bit of cuddle he imagine the feeling of having him all to himself he just couldn’t imagine anything like that anymore he needed to just cherish what was happening in that very moment.