The Unfortunate Dare

Description

"J-Jackson."

 

At the sound of my name, I heaved an annoyed sigh and cursed my luck under my breath.

"Woohoo! Then Jackson it is!" JB, one of the boys exclaimed in delight and pointed his finger at the lanky red head who sat opposite to me in the circle. The boy who uttered my name.


"So come on, Mark. Take your partner and go to the abandoned hospital today evening. You know the drill, bro."

 

At the sound of it, I knew that I wasn't the only one who was disturbed by the dare. I raised my gaze and narrowed my eyes at Mark in displeasure, for choosing me, but all that he returned was a small meek smile. 
His eyes silently apologized.

 

Though I was mildly angered by that situation I fell upon, I tried to think positively. Hey! it's just an old hospital- with many rumors. Yeah. Just rumors.

 

And then again, if we complete the mega dare, aka, the challenge of the month, we would get the money which we could split easily. 

 

Easy, right?

Foreword

So.. Another horror shot.

 

I hope that over the time, my writing style did improve- but meh.

I barely practiced writing.

 

So yeah. Muse your thoughts and subscribe if you like. 

 

Take care!

 

 

Be careful of the grey man in the hood.

Grey_Storm
I just realized- though I wanted to make the story a little more creepy, I failed OTL

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defsanam_xxx #1
Wow!
This is very very nice

May i translating your fic to persian plz?
kazuha03
#2
Chapter 1: Sequel please...
meemow123 #3
Chapter 1: Should ... not ... have .. read ... this .. at ... NIGHT ...
MUMMY HELP ME *hides* Damn this is good!!!! a sequel please? OMG did Jackson actually die??????? His other members didn't notice??? and what about Mark? did the man get him ... as well?????!!!!! O.O
this is soooo good ... need more ... well done!!
HanJacks #4
I love your style authornim, it's one n only :) . Btw this is good. XD
BearLover
#5
Chapter 1: Shoot...this is so good. Sequel?
sweetypiee #6
Chapter 1: OMG I WOULD HAVE JUST FAINT IN THERE AND NEVER WAKE UP. CREEPS
JEONJUNGK00K #7
Chapter 1: This gave me chills....i mean like the way you wrote it down makes me felt as if im in jackson's place....this is quite creepy though....im scared....
eyesmilegyu #8
Chapter 1: The first horror fics that ive ever read and gosh i could feel goosebumps all over me
Firevein
#9
Chapter 1: OMG!!! DAMNNNN!!!!!!
You neeeed to continue this!!!!
Wait... did he die???