The Undercover Job With A Twist

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Heyyyy Guys 

New Writer Here,Anyways this is my first time writing a fic

I know it may not be up to expectations and stuff but if you like the story please subscribe and upvote...

Thanksssssss

 

 

 

Note: Rated M for violence

 

 

 

Foreword

My name is Aiden Pearce, callsign Pearce, I'm Part of the Tier 1 United States Special Operations Division called, NightStalkers, currently holding the rank of Lieutenant, I am happy with my life.. I'm living the american dream, well sort off, I mean if you cinsidered living half of the year inside a Military Base and not being able to tell your family what you actual job is, is the American Dream then yeah. Anywas I'm currently on a Boeing 777 owned by the United States Army and on the way to Seoul, South Korea. I was not going to Seoul alone, with me were my fireteam, the four people that I trust the most. All we know is that we were going to Seoul and going undercover in some record label called SM Entertament. All we were told was that we were going there to investigate some intel that we had received about the label.

Nathanwong1
Next update is coming!!! Chapter is nearly done! :D

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AeronSky #1
Chapter 6: in "the next day" in derek's pov the first breakfast is spelled wrong. you wrote it as brekfast, you just forgot to add the "A" after the "E"
JohnnyAppleseed #2
Chapter 7: Wow, I just now noticed that all the characters are from ghosts....lol....im guessing you play COD?
coresplinter #3
Chapter 6: Good job. Update soon :)
everyday9
#4
Chapter 2: I like where this is going! Really, I think you could be on to something here :)
Just a few things:
1. Try to separate the lines said by your characters into different paragraphs. It gets a little tedious to read at times, also it can make your chapter look longer.
2. Maybe proofread a little? (but hey, I'm not one to talk because my stories have grammatical errors all the time) Just a thought...

And a quick question:
Is there any more genres you're adding to the story? Is it just a military genre or is it going to be a drama/romantic genre as well? Just curious.
Either way, you have yourself a new subscriber :) Update Soon!
SHARK4427 #5
Chapter 1: THE PRICE IS RIGHT
AND NEVER DISSOLVING SOAP ...
HMMMM... WHERE IS NIKOLAI AND MARKAROV?
SHARK4427 #6
AIDEN! !! WHERE IS YOUR FRIEND T BONE OR I SHOULD SAY TAENG BONE LOL SO IS THERE CTOS AND HACKING INVOLVED?