When the Snow Falls

Description

After losing the love of his life, Yongguk struggles to find a reason and the strength to move forward. He finds it in an unexpected place. Sometimes it takes more pain to make sense of loss... 

Foreword

EACH WINTER THE SNOW FALLS. EACH WINTER I THINK OF YOU.

 

 

This story is entered in Shoes of a Unicorn Writing Contest | Round Seven .

 

I want to thank Just For You Graphic Shop for the beautiful poster<3. 

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I also want to thank Hailstones Advertisement Shop for advertising this story for me<3.

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I also would like to thank Purple Swag Advertisements for their works advertising for me<3.

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Amalya
#1
Chapter 1: Quite the bittersweet read. I liked how you focused on the relationship between the brothers along with the loss they were both experiencing. Obviously, it was about love to an extent, but different kinds as well, and that was really touching. It felt a little confusing at the beginning with how you phrased things because it made me think Himchan's passing had just happened (and maybe it did but the time jump after wasn't as clear to me) so I got a little lost between the opening and the one year anniversary date but overall, I think you conveyed the emotion well. Junhong's desire to hide away with zoning music and Yongguk's quiet persistence in taking care of him. How they both had to help each other by the end. And you got me with Junhong's words there. Quite the speech from someone his age, but grief will do that to you sometimes I guess. The ending was enjoyable if only because it conveys a sense of hope and renewal, which was just the breath of fresh air that was needed to take the edge off. Nicely done. :)
Light_Archer
#2
Chapter 1: "I don’t know if I’d be strong enough to pull you out. You have to help yourself, too.” TT_TT this is just..omg my heart hurts. I also realized we have similar story titles XD anyway, great job! <33 poor yongguk ;v;
AXISfling
#3
Hello deary, your graphic is done. You can come pick it up. I hope you're fine with it being B&W.. I can't make it coloured because it would look weird for Himchan and Yongguk's face. I hope you understand. D:
Thank you for requesting and thank you for crediting!! :DDDDDDDDD
Hailstones
#4
Thank you for crediting! :))
akun_efefs
#5
Chapter 1: just found ur work...
godness i'm cryin now...
give me tissue pls...
MollsLeMouse
#6
Chapter 1: This made me cry a river. I just... ugh, Junhong's words were amazing, they just need to move on ;;
Thank you for the story <3
babiegel #7
Chapter 1: T___T amazing. Thank you for sharing :)
whitecheonsa
#8
This is a wonderful story. Thank you for sharing. this. :)
kleffki09
#9
Chapter 1: OMG.... I cried no more words really T.T amazing
-Tigress-
#10
Chapter 1: Oh goodness gracious, that made me cry!!! >.< I swear, you've been writing some of the saddest stuff recently!!!
I loved how you made it all memories and emotions, of how the loss was so painful on the anniversary; that's so true. And of course YG's last words <3<3<3