Orange Indeed

Description

Orange is the fine thread that strings them together; orange is the fray that pulls itself apart.

Foreword

Hi there!

This oneshot is an entry for the October Bash, a mini-competition under Solstice, a writing contest that is - less mini.

I encourage all of you to give Solstice a visit! I also encourage you to eat more bananas, because they are rich in potassium. In some ways potassium is good for you, I believe.

- Contorte

 

 

(absolutely gorgeous cover and bg by goldenblood at poisoned royalty)

(pls support she's wonderful)

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angelastyles #1
Chapter 1: wow. wooooow. ok thank you..?
at first, reading the first couple of lines, i'm like, ok wow this is cute. typical 2min fluff, not bad, i'm so in.
and then minho's monologue about surprising taemin and you have me floored because that's cuter then cute.
then taemin's ing some girl, which is good on him but poor minho im thinking.

and then -

wow ok. so thank you...? that's a tentative thank you because i want to thank you for writing so beautifully and your prose is like a breath of fresh air, but now i'm a bit miffed because i'm currently sweeping up the million little pieces of my heart that shattered on the floor.

so thank you
fefedove #2
Chapter 1: The promiscuous cabbage part really got to me. I keep trying to imagine it now.
Does this count as a 2nd POV fic? Because if so, then it's probably the best I've read. All the descriptions and details and diction...just ugh. And the ending.. more ugh.

Thank you for writing!
ExoNextDoor #3
My heart twitched in my chest a little at the end. This was great. I'll be looking at some of your other work. :3
kai_your_soo #4
Chapter 1: holy wow. you have really great writing skills and the way you chose the words and put them in order makes my heart weep for more of it. i hope you write more chilling stories like this! :D
butterscotchcream #5
Chapter 1: wow this is amazing /clapping slowly/
i mean-- i'm speechless
MasterTrollSama #6
Chapter 1: This was a beautifully dreamy-like fiction; unlike any others I have read. I'm quite astonished really. You are a skilled writer~
-Tigress- #7
Chapter 1: congratulations on winning the October Bash! I certainly wasn't expecting comedy from this =D
flamzfox #8
Congratulations! Your entry has been chosen as the winner for Solstice's mini contest. I loved the detail and the flow of this oneshot and the ending really made me bawl a little. Thank you for sharing it with us! The karma points should have already been sent to you.
DGNA_Forever #9
Chapter 1: I cannot write comedy to save my life, and I'm glad that someone can write it quite well, this story was cute, funny and sweet. I liked it<3. I hope you write more fics!!
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