Walk the Line

Description

Every time EXO reunites, neither he nor Jongdae are strong enough to resist one another.

Foreword

Disclaimer: I own nothing but the writing.

Talli wrote a future!fic where EXO reunite, for a contest. I couldn't resist writing a ChenLay spinoff when I saw she'd hinted at them. I seem to like writing these aus... *looks away from Baby Don't Cry*

If you read it, I hope you enjoy it! 

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wildvines
#1
Chapter 1: this is so sad
im sad

I CAME HERE TO HAVE A GOOD TIME AND I GET THIS
*shakes fist and holds back tears*

everything's so sad
why is this so sad
why are they so sad

SAD

YIXING IS SAD
JONGDAE IS SAD
WTF I H8 THIS
CRIES OVER THE SADNESS

I KEEP READING BACK TO SEE IF I MISSED ANYTHING BUT ALL MY BRAIN IS PROCESSING IS SAD THAT'S ALL

wtf this is really good :(
all the things that could have been

i read your replies to the other comments and one of them you mentioned that they really do miss each other but the jealousy's just going to continue to break them apart

and that just adds on to the reality of it bc i have a cousin who has the same situation minus the jealousy part. him and the girl obviously love each other deeply but it just never works out. every time they're together they drift apart. they break things off for awhile, start missing each other again, and the cycle continues

it so much to know you guys could work so well with each other but it just can't happen


I COULD CONTINUE ON SAYING HOW THIS WHOLE ENTIRE THING IS JUST PLAIN OUT SAD AND READ EVERY LINE OVER AND OVER AGAIN AND ANALYZE EVERYTHING AND CRY MULTIPLE TIMES

but i won't bc that would mean i hate myself and i want to love myself

THIS IS VERY GOOD
(AND SAD)

F- for the happy
A+++ for the SAD
Eye-Candy
#2
Chapter 1: OMG author-nim you almost made me cry in the subway ! I mean, chenlay is the only OTP I have left since taoris and xiuhan are gone with Kris ans Luhan. And reading a fic about exo disbanding and my otp break apart almost made me cry. I hate the fact Yixing has so low self-esteem. He could be famous in China, I'm sure of it. He is a great dancer, singer, composer, pianist, guitarist... The guy can do anything. I believe in him, Jongdae and your story. God, this comment turned out to be more emotional than I was planning... See what you do to me ?
whatisyixing
#3
Lol, i was wondering who wrote this, and turned out to be one of my favorite chenlay author XD
whatisyixing
#4
Chapter 1: That was intense. And sad. :( I lost my words. This is written so beautifully even when it is angsty.
puckbunny #5
Chapter 1: Omg i dont really read to much chenlay but this was so amazing and angsty i had to read it and im so glad i did. Im not sure if you were making a sequel to this bcos to me it seems like one of those stories that doesnt require one.
parvitasari #6
Chapter 1: Yeah it's always well written story if u are the author.. Can u make the sequel?? Or can u make another great chenlay stories? I'm getting addicted to it, OmG..
swabluu
#7
Chapter 1: omg ;_______; the angst >: (reading this because i don't want to write college essays oops)

as always your writing is impeccably perfect <3 i love your descriptions and the way everything is kind of implied so nicely and ajsdflkajsdf
nightingalesatnight #8
Chapter 1: Oh this is too sad but well written. I sincerely hope it never happens in real life.