The Cutie Panda (DISCONTINUE)

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Description

 Yifan and Chanyeol are bestfriend since child.They stayed in a apartment together because their parents were overseas at China.One day,they were going back to the their apartment and they saw small box in front of their door.They curious and decided to open it.They saw a little boy,who is thin,cute and has a beautiful eyes like panda.

"What are you doing in the box,little panda?" - Yifan 

        "Taozi baby,you're so cute like baby panda," - Chanyeol 

"Yeol gege!  Look!  Yifan ge bought me a panda plushie!"-Tao

 

Foreword

Hello~ This is my first fanfics and I'm Taoris shipper ^^ well,English is not my country language. So,I hope you can understand my story ~^0^~

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yini_666 #1
Chapter 21: Ahh my gosh! Love this <3
kpoplover_160 #2
Chapter 21: I love your story ^.^ I love it a lot
Madhatter_pey #3
Chapter 21: Exactly how old is Tao?
Taona_tao #4
Chapter 20: Do you need help for the story for example the use of vocabulary and how you phrase the sentence... It's a nice story though, nice plot, awesome storyline. If you want to edit your story, you can pm me. The only condition is that this story is still yours and you don't have to put credits for me. Im just helping you to make the story better so your story can be more popular than it is now. I think this story deserves more up votes, subscribers and all. So wish you good luck in the following part of the story. I really love how creative you are...
kristalesa
#5
I like this story and uhm anyway if you are worried about your English grammar then I can help you by proofreading it... which means I will be checking your grammar, spelling and such; but you would still be the one in charge of the story though. Nothing will change. This is only a suggestion though :D
theauthorkuduo
#6
Chapter 20: Wait a minute... how old is Tao again?