Where Did We Go Wrong?

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Yixing was left to wonder when everything fell apart.

Foreword

Yixing walked back and forth, holding his phone to his ear. He's been doing so for almost two hours now, and yet there was still no answer. "Answer the phone Fan, please..." he whispers.

This will probably be a two-shot fic, if not, then three chapters at the most. I will be updating the next chapter on Thursday, and will finish the whole thing next weekend. Hope you guys like my very first fic!!! :)

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Potato_Freak987 #1
Chapter 6: it's already middle of 2015 and I just read this orz. I like how you portrayed their characters. (and your inspiration is debatable, but I kind of think they got caught too, who knows lol) this is a heartwarming fanfic. kudos!
KpopComplex #2
Chapter 5: First off i want to say this story is soo sweet and got me right in the feels! Kris realizing he likes Lay *squeels* AH too sweet!! It feels very real and i love the way you write krislay

Second (for your inspiration part) Omgosh I can totally relate!! I absolutely feel Kris and Lay were together (maybe secretly married...is that too much??) and had to leave because it wouldn't be acceptable. I still believe they are in contact. They've been friends forever! You don't just forget someone you've shared a life with (and bed with) for so long just like that! Stay strong! I think there is a good chance we'll see kray again :)
FehcyAn #3
Chapter 6: oh my gosh, right in my heart this story is so beautiful I can´t help but mourn author-nim you are always the best, I love your stories and don´t know why I always end up crying like crazy!!
FehcyAn #4
Chapter 5: i know is so sad OTP Kray broken as my heart
FehcyAn #5
Chapter 4: oh my gosh is so sad *crying* no Yifan!!!! why???? why??
krispylays_eater #6
Chapter 6: -- "Sing for me again."

-- As he was listening, he couldn't help but tear up a bit. The song was sad and yet beautiful. It reminded him of his relationship with Yifan.

-- "Wait for me okay, Xing?" Yifan asked. "I will." replied Yixing

...would you stop making me cry with all these lines?? ￣﹏￣
krispylays_eater #7
Chapter 4: "We'll meet again when the time is right, okay?" asked Yifan. "Okay." answered Yixing.

Ugly sobs here omg ￣﹏￣
pollydimples #8
Chapter 5: Sooo sad T_T
But at least they know that they love each other.
I hope you'll write more fanxing ^_^
starry_diamonds #9
Omg this feels so real T_T my FanXing feels :'(
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