── PAPER FLAMES。─ FINISHING REQUESTS。

Description

paper flames.

( a review shop )

about us

why is it so cold

[Open] finishing requests, still accepting requests, though.

"What will happen if you set a paper on fire? paper flames. the flames grow bigger and bigger until the paper turns black and completely burnt. Watch how the flames burn and how the flames dance dangerously when the wind blows. ..paper flames. once you witness it closely and intently, flames are no such things to be scared of. You are scared of yourself; seeing how the flames roar insanely in front of you makes you cower back, those flames are your conscious, your negative thoughts, your mortal enemy. you just have to run through the flames and overcome your fears and weaknesses. and remember, there's no such thing as achieving success unharmed. You will always have to pay the price."

welcome to paper flames, a place where reviews are given from an author's burning heart. i don't guarantee the best reviews, but i promise you that I will give you some constructive critism reviews from the bottom of my heart to improve your stories in some way and you yourself, too. here, i review stories only.

[+] request form. ~~[+] hiring form~~. ~~[+] feedback form~~.

01. subscribing is compulsory when requesting. you can unsubcscribe after receiving your review(s). upvotes are loved. the request form can be found just above this rule.

02. comment after making your request and picking up, too, so i know that you have receive the review(s) and actually read it.

03. i won't guarantee that i will write the reviews in order. so, it's not a 'first come, first serve' thing.

04. the review(s) are only some advices and thoughts from me to you only, you don't really have to follow whatever I say in the review(s).

05. a thousand apologies if your review(s) is taking a long time, i am a student and i have a crappy school life outside of aff, too.

06. stories of grade A (89.5% up) will be featured and recommended and if you're lucky, advertised, too. Only the first ten chapters will be reviewed.

07. crediting the reviewer is not a must but the shop is necessary. we need food–i mean requests to survive, right? a link back to the shop in the foreword/description would be more then perfect.

must read

why are they so cold

rubric

if the ice melts

TItle. [10/10]
eye-catching, attracting? sparks the readers' interests and draw them in? relevant to the story enough or just some random-made-up title?

foreword/description. [10/10]
attractive enough to make the reader read on and click on the 'subscribe' button? enticing enough and worth looking forward to? relevant to story?

plot. [40/40]
unique and surprising? contains plot twists? excites the readers and not bore them?

characters. [15/15]
their personalities. is it confusing and too much for the readers to understand and remember?

consistency. [5/5]
flow of the story, too fast or too slow? can the readers catch up and understand what is happening in the story?

grammar/punctuations. [15/15]
too much grammar errors and typos? it may result in a 'turn off' for the readers.

enjoyment. [5/5]
the reviewer's overall enjoyment and maybe some advices/tips.

Overall marks: [100/100]

(+)extras;
readers respond.

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