The Loners

The Loners Club

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6the6fiend6, 1lonewolf, Suho, byuntaeng, thornydada, AbysmalAbyss, hkkmr94, sone0530, liLU

 

6the6fiend6: ran into that again today

 

1lonewolf: what did she do this time?

 

6the6fiend6: the usual . looked at me like i was dirt

 

hkkmr94: hence why i don’t leave the house

 

6the6fiend6: i had to get milk

 

Suho: @hkkmr94 us grownups have to take care of ourselves

 

6the6fiend6: yep can’t live with mummy forever

 

hkkmr94: you

 

liLU: are we talking about the dog who works at the petrol station?

 

1lonewolf: yeah it’s always her

 

liLU: ugh

 

liLU: if she looks at me i’d probably puke

 

thornydada: guys

 

byuntaeng: omg

 

byuntaeng: it arrived

 

sone0530: it as in it?

 

byuntaeng: hell yeah. have you got yours?

 

sone0530: no maybe next week

 

thornydada: GUYS!!

 

Suho: jesus no need for caps

 

AbysmalAbyss: hello thorny~

 

thornydada: thorny says hi too

 

AbysmalAbyss: :)

 

sone0530: @byuntaeng the moment of truth

 

sone0530: who did you get?

 

hkkmr94: i don’t know why we need a forum when we only use the chatspace

 

1lonewolf: yeah go start a thread

 

sone0530: i need auto refresh for that

 

byuntaeng: ........let’s trade if you get taeng

 

sone0530: ok ;(

 

6the6fiend6: anybody heard of the new guys?

 

1lonewolf: the cops?

 

6the6fiend6: yeah

 

liLU: poor bastards

 

hkkmr94: they won’t last

 

liLU: remember the last guy?

 

1lonewolf: how long did he last? a week?

 

hkkmr94: i bet the new guys won’t last that long

 

byuntaeng: man i should leave too

 

Suho: fly to seoul and marry your taengoo? lmao delulu fan is delulu

 

byuntaeng: i was thinking of going to the city and finding a job

 

byuntaeng:

 

AbysmalAbyss: maybe we should all leave this town

 

1lonewolf: i like it here tho

 

thornydada: i can’t leave thorny alone

 

liLU: then take him with you

 

sone0530: @liLU you’re thinking of leaving too?

 

liLU: there are nothing but s here

 

AbysmalAbyss: we can make plans together :)

 

liLU: i was talking about you

 

hkkmr94: oh burn

 

1lonewolf: heard you two are meeting up irl

 

liLU: how can we not? this town is so small you’d run into everyone going out the backyard

 

Suho: do i need to ban you two?

 

liLU: lol you think i’m a ?

 

Suho: just making sure

 

1lonewolf: loners ftw

 

thornydada: guys one of us just went offline

 

hkkmr94: we all know who that is

 

Suho: @liLU i think he’s in lurve with you

 

liLU: ugh spare me

 

sone0530: the dreaded holiday’s coming up

 

sone0530: who has plans?

 

6the6fiend6: i’m gonna kill that at the petrol station

 

6the6fiend6: anybody with me?

 

liLU: sounds good

 

hkkmr94: let’s give the new cops something to do

 

Suho: pfft you guys are pathetic

 

byuntaeng: i’ll be working

 

sone0530: at the petrol station?

 

byuntaeng: where else?

 

liLU: lol we have an insider

 

thornydada: thorny wants to go to the waterfall

 

1lonewolf: thorny will get ripped apart by the current

 

Suho: good riddance. we all hate that thing anyway

 

thornydada: you’re making thorny sad

 

liLU: going to the waterfall sounds like a decent plan

 

6the6fiend6: throw the in the water and get rid of the evidence

 

hkkmr94: she’ll be in there for weeks

 

1lonewolf: is this a group outing?

 

1lonewolf: with murder on the side?

 

Suho: what kind of group are we? the loners club?

 

6the6fiend6: the freaks

 

thornydada: the misfits

 

1lonewolf: i like loners the best

 

Suho: are we really going to the waterfall together?

 

liLU: let’s do it

 

liLU: i’ve never even met some of you

 

hkkmr94: nope not gonna happen

 

1lonewolf: there always has to be that one wet blanket

 

hkkmr94: i’m not going out

 

6the6fiend6: that’s right he can’t leave mummy

 

hkkmr94: off

 

thornydada: come on i have to leave thorny too

 

liLU: i thought he was the one who wanted to go?

 

thornydada: i can’t get him wet

 

byuntaeng: what about my job?

 

1lonewolf: we’ll go on your day off

 

Suho: so all of us can go? there are things i can't wait to say to your faces

 

byuntaeng: that doesn’t sound the slightest bit inviting

 

sone0530: who’s telling the missing member?

 

Suho: @liLU you can deal with your bf right?

 

liLU: for gods sake

 

AbysmalAbyss: what did i miss?

 

thornydada: oh you’re back

 

1lonewolf: scroll up

 

Suho: did you have a good cry?

 

AbysmalAbyss: i went to cook dinner

 

hkkmr94: at midnight?

 

liLU: lol it takes talent to be a loser both on and offline

 

AbysmalAbyss: why are you so mean to me?

 

1lonewolf: oh no

 

1lonewolf: take your lover’s spat to pm please

 

liLU: if one more person thinks we’re lovers istg

 

sone0530: @AbysmalAbyss we’re going to the waterfall during the holidays

 

AbysmalAbyss: all of us?

 

sone0530: yeah

 

AbysmalAbyss: ok

 

6the6fiend6: are we still killing the ?

 

byuntaeng: no wtf don’t make my job any more difficult than it already is

 

Suho: i’m off to sleep. i’ll come up with a concrete plan and let you guys know

 

AbysmalAbyss: goodnight

 

thornydada: thorny says goodnight too

 

Suho: yeah. i have a feeling something exciting’s going to happen

 

 

 

 

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mariaexofi #1
Chapter 15: I really liked the way you constructed the loners club and made the characters interesting and different than usual. I quite enjoyed it, though i'd enjoyed it more if i hadnt guessed the culprit early on. Anyways, great work!
a2c5a7cia #2
Chapter 15: You are so good. Hands down, the best!
murkhaust #3
this was really good! had a great feel to it with some pretty good twists - i had to read the part where sehun is introduced multiple times like 'wait what?!'

I listened to dance of death by andrew bird when i read this, i think it fits perfectly. it made everything seem more mysterious/creepy
Coffee2s #4
Chapter 15: Oh. My. God. It's too late into the night but wow?? I can't believe it?! This was so good.
zyxismylife #5
I kinda suspected it was xiumin....but I didn't expect him to be able to get away with it :OOO
Bookangel12390
#6
Chapter 15: Chapter 15: My brain just exploded!!! It was Minseok!!! Jongin's living with a murderer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
deacwm #7
Chapter 15: First of all u ed my mind. I expect all of them are the killers and u know some twist user name like what i think who should be who at the first time i read chapter two. I THOUGHT 6The6Fiend6 was Tao, byuntaeng was baekhyun, thornydada was chanyeol, sone0530 was jongdae, 1lonewolf was yixing. I thouhht U PURPOSELY SWITCH THEM. but no??! That is so genius. This fic is so fantastic!! I love it!!! I love You!!!!!!
berryberrystrawberry #8
Chapter 15: Woooooaaahhh I was not expecting that!!! This was really great, thank you for this!!
From all the exo mystery fanfics I've read, the culprit is, most of the time, Minseok, but I was totally not expecting that he would be the killer hehehe ^^
Great job!!
yuuki_212
#9
Chapter 15: This story need thousand comments tho. I like how Sehun has a dark side and him being sarcastic always amuse me the same you did to Yixing and his potty mouth, I never read in any fanfic Yixing would be that at cursing lol, the pairings were unsual indeed however the way you made tht all pairings seems acceptable. I knew the killer was Minseok by some chapters ftom how he accepting odd things in tht town and the way he convinced Jongin to settled down at tht place. I like the conversation between the characters, I felt them alive by that and how I can feel the bitterness in Kyungsoo when Luhan likes him but couldn't get the idea into the relationship let alone being queer. How about a sequel? Since now Jongin slept with the killer? Wondering how will he react to that ?;) Anyway will read all your stories tho. Again, this story is awesome really!
mssavor404 #10
Chapter 15: I DIDN'T SEE THAT COMING AT ALL!
THIS WAS SUCH A SATISFYING STORY TO READ!
I UPVOTED AS A THANK YOU!