➳ // the applicants

EXTЯΛ // Life Is Extra Ordinary // JYP's new girl group w/ their very own reality show!! // apply now! ^^ [ON HOLD]
LAST UPDATED ➳ 10/15/2014
 
 
 

xP07Lha.pngUSERNAME • PLOTLINE • STAGE NAME • FACE CLAIM • LOVE INTEREST • STATUS (CHOSEN/ACCEPTED/PENDING/REJECTED)

a example hehe

 
 
 

xP07Lha.pngDINOBEEP • PLOTLINE 1 • JOOA • SEO SUNG KYUNG • JINYOUNG (JR.) • CHOSEN

since my character is part of the story, i added her here. so this is my character \o/

 
 
 

xP07Lha.pngLOVELUYOONALWAYS • EVELYN • PLOTLINE 2 • PARK SOO YEON • JEON JUNGKOOK • PENDING

first off, thanks for being the first one to apply! ^^ you did well for your first time actually. the face claim you chose so looks like taeyeon from snsd omg! you have some 'minor' mistakes that you should fix; you went past the between kyumin and luhan, thats why i leave the love interest above blank. the was 4 years so you should change your love interest or use one of the back ups. second mistake is that you made kyumin as a trainee from sm entertainment instead of jyp. lolz. you can either change all that to make her a trainee from jyp entertainment or say that she used to be from sm ent and explain how she got into jyp ent. you chose 'i got a boy' as their debut song, and i was thinking of using that or other songs from them as their debut. and what a good gif of bambam *^* i also suggest you to write more but since this is your first time, its alright i guess. anyway, hope youre satisfied with your review and  thanks for applying! 

2ND UPDATE: here is the update, sorry for being late >< anyway, i've noticed you changed a lot of your app but i dont see that much errors anymore so that good! i was confused when you changed your face claim because hwan hui was fine but okay then. hope you dont mind if i pick your back-up face claim bc she looks younger and it fits her age and jungkook as your love interest. you are accepted~ and again, thanks for applying o/

 
 
 

xP07Lha.pngALIZE6203 • MINNIE • PLOTLINE 4 • HONG YOO KYUNG • HYUNTAE • ACCEPTED

okay, sorry for the late review ;; since theres no mistakes (except you didnt put her height and weight in the appearance section but its not really a problem) in your app and her personality and talent skills fits her well, i'll put you as accepted ^^ i dont really see people use bigflow as their love interest but when i saw hyuntae as her love interest OMG dem feels asdfghjlj-- anyway, thanks for applying!

 
 
 

xP07Lha.pngUSERNAME • STAGE NAME • PLOTLINE • FACE CLAIM • LOVE INTEREST • STATUS

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loveluyoonalways
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Chapter 3: hehe, I am accepted :3
I can't wait for the story to start XD