And Then He Was Gone

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What went wrong?

Jinyoung couldn't think back to when it started.

When the fighting started.

They'd grown farther apart and he hated it. Despised it, even.

He'd been trying to find a way to fix it. Fix their problems, because deep down, he still loved him.

But it went wrong. All wrong.

And then it was too late. Too late to resolve anything.

Because he was gone.

Foreword

"Yah, Park Jinyoung, you know I love you, right?"

The ravenette blushed at his hyung's words, but nodded his head anyway.

"Then stay with me forever."

Jinyoung looked up at Mark and smiled, nodding his head again.

"Of course. I'll be by your side forever, and that's a promise."

That was about a year ago. When everything was perfect.

And he still couldn't figure out what went wrong, he wasn't sure if he ever would.

But he knew one thing for sure; he broke his promise. And Jinyoung hates breaking promises.

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jen_thor #1
Chapter 1: Chapter 1 is heartbreaking. #feelsandtears
casseyfreakin
#2
Chapter 4: I was in a super bad mood today, and I went to aff to cry myself out. now I'm literally crying. (╥_╥)

no epilogue is better than adding worse scenario which causes another pain. happy markjin or just leave it that way. please.

you did a super great job!
and the flashback parts, I love it.
thanks for writing this ❤
yEsuiUnNie
#3
Chapter 4: How about .. Emmm actually can Mark not die and they have a happy ending ...huhuhu ..
seoul061896 #4
Chapter 4: please bet it be a spinoff with happy ending, but please never let jinyoung be in love with someone else it wouldnt be fair for mark hhihihhi
paradigmbaby
#5
Chapter 3: Rather than epilogue... Can you write the spin off instead? Like, they actually have an happy ending..
rioji26 #6
Chapter 2: Just kill jinyoung for that tragic love story ((sorry I have a thing for that)) or just let him live his life with mark in his heart and to not fall in love with somebody new and just be happy and be successful maybe adopt a kid and name it mark?
cocombers
#7
Chapter 2: okaay. so this is what I thought. Keep the setting in the funeral then I was hoping that Mark kinda left a message or something telling him things about after-he-stoped-cuddling-him. The message would be filled with words unspoken and memories. It was like, Mark's pov of reminiscing and that it was pure angst which I really love. Then at the end part of it was mark telling him to move on or something and fin. Keep the Markjin thing just that it would end in the way that Jinyoung wouldn't feel guilty about finding a new lover in the future. heh tysm
jurigkpop #8
Chapter 2: MARKJIN all the way....
please... this was an almost perfect fic.... do not ruin it with putting someone to replace Mark in Jinyoung's heart..... it's hurting so bad..... Just let it be like that... or put an epilogue but about Mark and Jinyoung... no need to add another character just to make Jinypung happy again.... just write about how he love Mark... if you want to pair Jinyoung with a new guy... write it in another fic please.... you already made as (me) sad almost angry for making Mark dead.... do not add it...
sorry, this sound so mean but, I just love MARKJIN so much....