[Status: OPEN] A Lion's Roar Review Shop (feat. VIXX's Leo)

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Welcome to "A Lion's Roar Review Shop" featuring my bias in VIXX, Leo!

It has been a little over FIVE YEARS since I joined this wonderful site. Therefore, to commemorate my fifth anniversary, I have decided to restart my review shop.

First of all, I would like to apologize to those of you have waited for months on end for a review from me over the past two years. Although I have been busy with school, work, home, and ministries at church, those activities should never be the reasons for my absence on this site. As I mentioned in my previous version of this shop, you were free to delete your request and move on to other shops, as long as you informed with a post in the comments or personal message. I do not want to hinder you from receiving the review you want and deserve. Again, I apologize if I have done so in the past.

Now, I am going to start with a new slate. Whatever stories I have taken into my shop, I will finish. However, after that batch, I will begin again and pace myself so that reviews will be finished within a week. I cannot guarantee that they will be finished within that timeframe, but I will definitely do my best to complete them during that time.

I have moved all of my past reviews into a portfolio of sorts, a separate archive for Authors to refer to if they are unsure of whether or not to request my services. You may view them here: ARCHIVES

With that said, I welcome you to my review shop, where I will offer my honest opinion on stories, if you so request it. Thank you so much for spending time to request here at the shop! I appreciate your interest in my services and honesty in submitting your work for review. You can be sure to receive a review with just as much interest and honesty.   

So, without further ado, upwards and onwards!  

*He's adorable, isn't he? I mean, THEY are adorable, aren't they? XD
 

 

Foreword

Rules:

1. You must subscribe to receive a review, upvoting is optional.

2. No /Yuri. [M] is okay, but NO . This is a personal preference, please don't take offense.

3. Request HERE, then comment to tell me that you requested.

4. If I am taking too long, let me know. I will do my best to hurry.

5. Please do not request at other shops while you are requesting here at this shop. From one Author to another, it is common courtesy to stick to one shop a story...

6. You are free to withdraw your request at any time, just let me know.

7. Comment to tell me that you received my review and please credit me in your Foreword!

And some notes to keep in mind...

*I will be going in order by request.

*I will subscribe to your stories for your review.

*Stories with ten chapters or more will take a while to receive a review.

*Feel free to respond to your reviews. I would love to interact with all of you! Also, I believe that reviews should involve both the Author and Reviewer. Sometimes, things need clarification, from both sides of the review. ^^

 

Status: OPEN BUSY CLOSED

jovayuyu - 10 Ways to Get You Back (Pending/Done)

Cassieslover - Bounce To The World (Pending/Done)

littlemisshappyify - The Imposter (Pending/Done)
 

Author's Thoughts
nasomi2011
wishing_on_a_star, your review is ready for pick-up! :) 7.21.15, 12:50 am
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teenme14 #1
Hi ^^ Are you still open for requests?
JESLEN #2
Requested :-)
Thank you very much in advance ^_^
JESLEN #3
Hello ^_^ It's me! Lols. Ive already credited you!
And gosh. Your reviews are really thorough and satisfying.
I would like to request again but I have one question though: after reading rule 5, is it ok to request when I already received reviews from other shops? Thanks so much
ScarletBallerina #4
Chapter 9: Hello! I'm so so sorry for responding to you very late, I was quite busy with other things too, myself hahaha!

As usual, thank you so much for the in-depth review! It gave me a much more-thorough grasp with regards to writing one-shots! The review helped me so much! Your words will help me improve and I got to learn a few bits and pieces of advice! Thank you so much!
Diaz96 #5
I've requested!!!!
jovayuyu #6
Hi! I have requested! :-)
kpopfanficmonster #7
Chapter 5: Omg that gif tho. Hahahahaah

Jung. Taek. Woon.
JESLEN #8
Chapter 10: Congratulations for finishing your degree! I understand that we must prioritize our lives outside of AFF so dont be sorry about the long wait. This review is worth waiting for :-) And you're not harsh at all silly! :-) I loved constructive criticism thats wThank took such great care in selecting reviewers. Amd you'rethe first reviewer of this story. Once again,thank you very much for this awesome review. I will make sure to incorporate the suggestions and to credit too (using my mobile right now so it's kinda hard to do it properly). But i promised that i will definitely credit :-) Thank you for deciding to continue reading the story despite the flaws. I really appreciate the time you invested in reviewing this and I will surely request again :-)

3/3
JESLEN #9
Chapter 10: I absolutely agree with all of the things that you pointed out about the plot. To be honest, all i thought was the beginning and end of the story. I already laid out the beginning and i have the idea how to end it. But my mind keeps on juggling ideas for the events in the middle of the story. That is why it took me months to update, it's like i had this difficulty in threading dark water where i had put myself. I just updated recently because i feel do bad not updating. For now,im working really hard in laying out every detail/event.

Now that you mentioned it, the characterization is not too strong. I hve to take note of that too. I had this idea of making joongki mysterious, to the point that i will refrain from using his pov as much as possible. But i think that his character might become too dull if i do that. Well the use of mediums by angels,of why they use them instead of ppearing as themselves will be pointed out later on :-) for now, i might unintentionally give spoilers haha.

2/3
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