Chapter 1: oh my god oh my god oh my ing lord. i love how it was so simple yet not...like the imagery and everything was so pretty and blunt and the fact that nothing was capitalized? i'm thinking of a bunch of literary devices but my brain isn't really working anymore?
Chapter 1: Are you kidding me, this is great. Angsty, I almost didn't breath until the end, even though I anticipated this ending. I was still like "but what if...". <3
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