Redemption of the FALLEN

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THIS ISN'T ABOUT LOVE  , IT'S ABOUT THE PAIN IT BRINGS.

Everybody make mistakes cause we are human but he shouldn't have. First he was this hot but eerie guy from the club then he became the guy that seduced and tricked me.

He chose the wrong TARGET to aim therefor hunter become the prey and from then a new hunt started.

THIS ISN'T ABOUT FREEDOM, IT'S ABOUT THE SACRIFICE WE MAKE TO GET IT

Everybody make mistakes that's what humans say but I am not so I shouldn't have.First she was this unimportant another gorgeous girl from the club then she became the girl I craved.

I chose the wrong PERSON, I should've realized that she was her sooner but I didn't so that became my first and biggest mistake.There was no going back , I was going to loose it all or she was going to die.

THIS ISN'T ABOUT FATE, IT'S ABOUT THE SUFFERING WE GO THROUGH AS WE HAVE IT

I was okay as long as she was there even it was only a part of her but then things got changed I wanted more ... I wanted all and this time I shall have it.

 BAE JIN YONG 

 

 

 

 

 

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He is a born Image result for bae jinyoungvampire who is unfortunate enough to find his mate or more accurately his master.Not all the vampires can

meet their mates nor all have one and since masters are humans not long living creatures like vampires the possiblities are really low.

Only born vampires have masters/mates and unlike the borns normal made ones have mates whom are only their other half  and not puppeteer of their souls and bodies. 

The born vampires who are gifted with strength superior to others have been balanced with the chains of their masters but just like any slave borns are not all that obedient and pleasant about the idea so therefor almost since the  begining borns have been hunting down the masters or more accurately they've been trying to do so and Jinyong's  sole motive  is to meet his master once more and kill her before twelve tattoos are complete and he is enslaved to his master forever.

 KIM JONGIN 

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He is a shifter  but  a cursed  one by his inner beast's force ,too much lethal power that he has no control over so he never dares to shift since he learned what he truly is.

There is one solution to his problem but in this coming war some are more keen to unleash his wrath to the world for their benefit. 

Who can he trust or more importantly who he shouldn't and that is a question with an answer which might prevent a tragedy.

He is not fond of vampires just like the most of the supernaturel world  since the good natured ones with their blood lust under control are rare to come by but he might just seek help of a one and even befriend several of their kind.

Kim Jongin aka Kai the lone wolf what shall be his fate as he tries to proctect everyone with a facade made of lies to prevail a war or even prevent it, what shall will become of him as he finds his mate in between the blood bath only to never have her ?

 

 LEE HANA 

 

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Popular, smart, hot, beautiful and rich girl of  the Seoul university.

At the age of 21 she had everything that one can dream  and she had even more than what

others thought or even she knew yet she didn't have one thing what the rest of the world had.

She didn't know how to love or have feelings what made one a human not that she had unloving parents or she had a harsh childhood it was her nature,the way she was born.

Without love there was no pain therefor she was a happy person indeed yet happiness wasn't the only thing she got.

A happiness and big smiles without sincerity and a soul that appreciated that glee,

That's what she got , emptiness ... that caused by the lack of pain and in this life one is always bounded to misery for the 

good fortune that it got, so she was,she just didn't know... yet.

Foreword

Actually this is my third fanfic but due to lack of response and bad review I took them down.I wasn't going to post any fic again since I'm not much of a writer but I realized I can't improve unless I start from somewhere so here I am open to all criticisms.Hopefully there will be at least one person to criticize my fic so that I can be better.Please subscribe,upvote and more importantly leave your comments :)  

 

 

EDIT: 

I'M GOING TO REWRITE ALL THE CHAPTERS AND HOPEFULLY I'LL ABLE TO UPDATE REGULARY WHEN MY UNI-ACCEPTANCE EXAM IS OVER.

THANK YOU A LOT TO THOSE WHO DID NOT UNSUB ^^ 

EDIT:Due to Tao's leave from exo I'm changing the characters and the story's direction. 

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because of the latest tao controversy i'll be not updating this story until i find suitable replacement for tao's character

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mikkydragon #1
Chapter 4: i like it ...........update soon........
mikkydragon #2
Chapter 3: update soon...............
Kpopsecrets #3
i love it!
twinkle_blossom #4
Omo! This sounds interesting! I'll give it a go! ^^
Kokokitten
#5
Chapter 1: Ooo~ this is really good so far. I've never heard of anything like this before. (Vampires having a human master)