Our Story

Description

This the first time i'm publishing the stuff i write, I have experience in writing lyrics but stories and fanfics are whole new thing for me. I hope you all will like it , even if you don't plese do comment my mistakes and the things i can improve on.

Thank you for taking ur time to read this .

 

Foreword

So that was how our story began and this is how our story ended...............

 

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woobriel #1
Chapter 1: i really like this, it's so poignant and it captures their young love innocence wonderfully. thankyou for writing!
april10252 #2
Chapter 1: A short simple sweet story of there life it was nice to read and the ending brought tears to my eyes nice job!
-Yuan- #3
Chapter 1: I wasn't expecting to tear up at the end, but I did.
It was diffrent' I'm not a huge fan of first perspectives, but since this was more like a poem it really matched. The first parts could have been lyrics they were really beautidul and sometimes even ryhmed.
It changed a little from a ryhme to just a lyrical text however it was a very nice read thank you for sharing
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