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Chapter 4: Uwaaaa I just read this with Beast's "Shadow" playing and I LOVED IT. This is such a cool and interesting story (though I'm kind of scared cuz stuff like this spooks me so bad). Anyway, I hope you can get to updating again, cuz I definitely would LOVE it if you continued <3

I really feel bad for Dongwoo in this chapter. I mean we know he cares about Myungsoo, and Myungsoo cares about him, but it seems a bit selfish on Myungsoo's part with the issue about the pills. He knows how emotionally damaging those nightmares are for Dongwoo, to the point that Dongwoo is almost petrified to go to sleep without them, yet Myungsoo doesn't quite seem to get it? Or maybe he gets it, but his urge to see Dongwoo and be with him eclipses his sympathy for it maybe. It puts Dongwoo in a bind because now he's feeling guilty over something he has every right to be afraid of. And now the damages are starting to spill into reality too.
Maybe it's just me, but Woohyun seemed kind of...stifling in this chapter? I mean he comes at Dongwoo as if he is entitled to Dongwoo spilling out his life story and Dongwoo doesn't even know him that well. When he asked about Dongwoo's powers, he had this whole passive-aggressive thing going on that low-key grated on my nerves. Maybe because I have a thing about people getting in my business that I don't know very well, it seemed like Woohyun was over stepping boundaries, and didn't care. And Dongwoo- bless his heart- can be convinced of anyone's point of view as long as they keep throwing their logic in his face. It happened with Myungsoo in the dream with the pills, and now it happened with Woohyun in convincing him that his loneliness would be cured if he became Woohyun's partner. It's not a bad thing to work with Woohyun, but it makes you wonder if Dongwoo does half the things he's done so far because he honestly wanted to do it for himself, or because he was convinced it's what he needed to do. I'm probably the only one who's really damn annoyed by Woohyun right now lmao. But with Dongwoo, he seems starved for validation and attention, and he sort of surrounds himself with these unhealthy relationships because these are the kind of people that seem to 'understand' him the best, even if they are bad for him at times.

Chapter 4: Yay! You finally updated! I was waiting for this for soooooo looooonngg. xD
OMG. What happen to Dongwoo? I don't want my baby to get hurt. T^T
I laughed when Dongwoo was screaming in his mind 'my ity!' xD
And, and. *squeals* Dongwoo accepted the job!

Chapter 3: Actually I agree with kiri125 a sounds hoooooottt!!! Sorry I'm commenting so much lol.

Chapter 3: Woooooooooow!! I'm glad I checked this story out! I'm loving it so far... Loving the pairing dongsoo