Chapter 1: I think the impression you were after in the beginning set in because of course like the rest of your readers i thought he was dead and then i was like oh now he's a ghost, but then the dog saw him so i was like oh dogs see ghost too? When he said he was interacting with the dog then i understood. Why play with my emotions with such a great story like that.....lol it was great!!! I can't be upset after that :)
Chapter 1: /flips my life/ this is one of the best neo oneshot that I ever read. tumbs up for this!! Adorable plus sweet!! Teeheeee ~ Great job author nim! ^^
Chapter 1: Omg omg omg this is so AMAZING~ you surprised me at the ending. Gosh Oh i want to tell you how much i adore this story. You should write more Neo becuz your writting is super great~ love it LOVE IT~
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