One Day Late
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One Day Late | kaychi
Chaptered // 7 Chapters
"You never told me of anything you went through, leaving me in the dark. You left without turning back. Did you even hesitate for one second? I waited for you... and for what? "I'm a fool." I tell myself repeatedly. But yet, I sat there waiting for days, months, years. " I'll be back," those words you promised me. They were lies.
All you leave me with now is the sound of your voice..." ( + ) this story is quite unique for me actually and because of this, I liked it. Not love, but just like. The plot was good and the characterization and character development was quite good also plus the flow was nice. It was a good read for me actually, but there are some things that ticked me off at the end but the ending was so heart-clenching ToT ( - ) the font. I want to tell the author to change the font but I don't have the heart to do so. The font kind of turned me off at first but I continued on reading the story with no regrets at the end. the writing style is also kind of bland, but the chracters and plot make up for that. There were also some grammatical errors and typos every here and there. comments:
"jabsksbsjsbnd it can't just end like thiiiiiissss ; ----- ;"
"OMG that's it?! omg omg omg omg, i'm going to cry now"
"that's it?! ToT nooooooo" linkeu: v
Chaptered // 7 Chapters
"You never told me of anything you went through, leaving me in the dark. You left without turning back. Did you even hesitate for one second? I waited for you... and for what? "I'm a fool." I tell myself repeatedly. But yet, I sat there waiting for days, months, years. " I'll be back," those words you promised me. They were lies.
All you leave me with now is the sound of your voice..." ( + ) this story is quite unique for me actually and because of this, I liked it. Not love, but just like. The plot was good and the characterization and character development was quite good also plus the flow was nice. It was a good read for me actually, but there are some things that ticked me off at the end but the ending was so heart-clenching ToT ( - ) the font. I want to tell the author to change the font but I don't have the heart to do so. The font kind of turned me off at first but I continued on reading the story with no regrets at the end. the writing style is also kind of bland, but the chracters and plot make up for that. There were also some grammatical errors and typos every here and there. comments:
"jabsksbsjsbnd it can't just end like thiiiiiissss ; ----- ;"
"OMG that's it?! omg omg omg omg, i'm going to cry now"
"that's it?! ToT nooooooo" linkeu: v
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