Tomorrow

Description

Tomorrow was what you promised me. Yet here I am stuck in the remnants of yesterday. 

Foreword

NEW POSTER! creds to LUXUS Graphic shop (she's lacking in customers, so y'all should get on it :))

Entering for Solstice Writing Contest:

Prompts used: 

3. A RAINDROP LANDING ON YOUR CHEEK IS A KISS FROM SOMEONE IN HEAVEN WHO IS WATCHING OVER YOU.

5. I CARRY YOUR HEART (I CARRY IT IN MY HEART). (E.E. S)

13. WHEN TOMORROW COMES, A DAY OF PRETENDING AS IF NOTHING HAPPENED WILL START ONCE AGAIN. (TABLO)

 

No reviews have been made, I just wrote this oneshot for the contest and I thought it would be cool to try something like this. Inspired by "Tomorrow" by BTS, which happens to be one of my favorite songs of all time.

I actually had a little story like this in my head for quite some time, so this is my take on an angsty oneshot story :)

 

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citydreams #1
Chapter 1: Wow, I usually don't give oneshots a try because I always feel like there's always something missing, but this really came full circle. It's really good. I love how detailed you are with everything and it's like I can imagine everything that's going on with her and her environment. You do a really good job of using the right words to portray the right image and it was a complete shock when we found out about Junhong because from the beginning, when Eunbi began talking about him, I was already wondering what happened to him. Overall, good job with this. It was short, but it was definitely worth the read!
WinterHarmony #2
Chapter 1: Decided to read this one too, since you linked it in your forward.
This one really touched me, mostly because I've been in a similar position in terms of losing someone special and close to me. I think you were able to portray your character's feelings very well. Reading this brought tears to me, because I was able to really understand her feelings of missing Zelo.
In terms of BTS's song & your usage of the song itself in this story, I think you did a fairly good job! I, too, love the song, and it's one of my most favorite songs of all times, mainly for its lyrics. Being a huge fan of this song, I know you had done a very nice job portraying the lyrics in your oneshot.
chaoticdiamond #3
Chapter 1: This story broke my heart tbh
XiuHanLuHan #4
Chapter 1: Ohhh this is very good cx
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