The Kpop Gamer (One-Shot Trial)

Description

I wrote this one shot to see what kind of interest the story would generate. I haven't decided if I would include like my other stories but this is simply to get feedback.

 

Please read and tell me what you think about the story. Comment what you enjoy about the story and what you think would help it improve. Thank you all and look forward to more stories in the future :)

Foreword

My other two oneshot trial stories. If you got time rank all three of them. If not then just tell me what you think about the one you find most interesting or the one you read :D Thanks!

 

Detective Yung

The Gamer Ver. 2

 

Or you can go to my profile and just comment and vote for your favorite through the poll :D

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donkloksir09 #1
Chapter 1: bump into son naeun? hemmm i wonder what happens next
coresplinter #2
Chapter 1: Haha I like how you make the character ask how do you log out and no one answers :P
y_poodle #3
Reading cause it has apink and snsd both my biased groups :D but I must say tho. It's going to be alittle disappointing when the main character wakes up and everything was a game o.o
FanyNampyeon #4
Chapter 1: This looks promising #support
ktvftw #5
wow, it really is like the gamer lol. This has lots of potential; you probably have the incoming characters' backgrounds roughly thought out and I think it might be best to introduce them quickly. I also like how it also combines SAO elements like you said it would. Overall, it's nice and I can't wait to read more chapters when you post them out.
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