Chapter 17

Oblivious Love
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"--"Hey, lovelies. Its been awhile that I've updated it. Sorry, you must be bored and yeah, hated me. I;m busy with the whole stuffs and just two days ago is my my graduation day. I know I'm not your best author but I'll try to be one :) Mochichos, I love you :) So, here my update and It'll be extra long to show how sorry I am to who ever read this crappy story of mine.

 

 

"Luhan, where are you going?" Hee asked, head snuggling on Luhan chest. "Somewhere's not that far. I promise I'll come back early." He said, getting up from those comfy sofa of Hee's.

"Okay then. I'll be here." She smiled. Luhan pursued his lips while nodding. 

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He sighed. 'Sorry Hee. I have no intention to hurt you, but I know I've done a big mistake towards Bella.' He thought. While driving, his head couldn't stop thinking how badly he treated Bella. 'She's a nice girl and she didn't deserve to be hurt.'

 

 

 

"Bella?" He whispers. 

"Lu-Luhan?" She replied. Luhan gasped at how awful Bella is. With bandages on her head, Dark circles and all that awful things like you always see in a prison or maybe in a mental hospital.


"Bella, I'm so sorry. I know I shouldn't treat you like this, and I know I owe you an explanation, I know you were hurting, bad." Bella bit her lips before sighing hard. "Then, if you know, even a one visit couldn't be your daily basis, Luhan? Should I say this? I know you shouldn't treat me like this. I know you owe me a BIG explanation and I know I was hurting, bad."

 

"I'm so sorry," He said again, tears begin to fall. Bella scoffed. "Don't actually cry because you are guilty, Luhan. Even a single tears of yours couldn't compared to mine. And don't acted like you actually care!" She yelled. 

Luhan sighed. "I'll tell you why I'm so stupid doing things like this,"

 

Throwback.

 

"Luhan, are you busy?" Hee asked. He turned his head, facing Hee's. "Not exactly. I have something to attend after this. Why?" 

Hee sighed. "Actually, I-"

"YO, LUHAN!" Tao hollered from the end of the corridor. Luhan sighed. "Maybe next time, okay? See you."  With that, he rushed towards Tao, smacking his head before smirking.

Hee sighed. "Guess today is not the day." She mutter.


 

"What?! Bella's sick?" Luhan yelled. Hee nodded. "How can?" "She said she was staying in the cold and ended up having a big flu." He widen his eyes. "FLU? Yah this kid trying to make me extra worried to her!" 

Hee pursued her l

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Chocolate_Crush
#1
Chapter 24: This is awesome!!! But I think that you need to re-check your grammars here... NO OFFENCE!!
Rainbowlovelydovey #2
Chapter 22: Omo I love your story. I knew that hee is not a good person.
Kim__Bella #3
Omg... my name >•< !!! I really love your story authornim .. (read this over and over again Xp) authornim JJANG!!! <3 <3 <3
happikkumaness
#4
Chapter 23: your welcome ^-^
let's see how your new story will be like :3
excited to read!! ♥
happikkumaness
#5
Chapter 21: I think for your first story it was really good ^-^
Keep up with writing!! (I know it's a tough job but if you're lovin it you can share your love with your readers and with much love every story will be great in its own way!! Fightign!) ♥ I'm sure your new story will be good as well!!♥
Thank you author-nim for your first story to share with us! <3 :)
happikkumaness
#6
Chapter 19: Ah I missed your updates my love *_* <3
I'm so happy Luhan finally apologized :3
now he has to take extrem-good care so bella would be happy and fine again!! >o<
happikkumaness
#7
Chapter 18: poor bell :(
But what exactly happened to Luhan an Park Hee?
The Boys are taking so good care <3
But will Luhan appear any time? He Need to know how much she's suffering :0

Do you really want to finish it already?:(( please keep on♥
happikkumaness
#8
Chapter 17: evil PARK HEE!!! >.< I knew it. ò.ó!!
PAY BACK PAY BACK PAY BACK!! :D *cheer*
give me a p.a.y.b.a.c.k!!!!
AAAH Bella I feel so sorry for her, really!!!!>.<
WHUATS UP WITH LUGE!? Is he insane or something? ToT'''
Invisible_hunter
#9
Chapter 17: oohh pay back time XD