Betrayal

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Who is the angel of love?

Foreword

"What are you talking about, hae?" I ask, exasperated and slightly scared.
A pause. "It's Leeteuk, isn't it?"
I stop walking, my eyes widening.

How could he know?!

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iam_me00
#1
Chapter 3: 😱😱😱
fighter #2
you sure did great here, love the jealousy part but hate the tragedy part hehehe .
Makoto
#3
this is so sad TT^TT i cried as i was reading this....
kimchi1004 #4
'' "Sorry!" Leeteuk hesitates, then smiles. "Heechul, I love you!" There is no love behind that statement. Just something that vaguely resembles resentment. When he makes a heart, mine dies. '' that killed me T____T<br />
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'' "Donghae sure is a good dancer, huh?"<br />
The effect is immideate. His shoulders tense, and he looks over to glare, angry in spite of himself. Aha moment. Ephipany. Lightbulb. Bingo. Yatzhee. Oh my shisus, I think I've figured it out.<br />
"Eunhyuk too." The glare becomes agonized, and I can't bear it any longer.<br />
"But I like the way you sing much better." I end casually. '' OMGGG so sweet <3 ;___;<br />
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overall.. this fic was really really well written and it made me cry. i HATE!!!!!! character deaths especially if it's my suju-boys but somehow i always end up reading these<br />
:( thanks for writing<3
buingbuingaegyo #5
Omg! That was amazing! please write more teukchul!
blamegame7 #6
this is AMAZING!! Good job:))...i wish you could write more teukchul