Hey, what's up? Um, this is my second one-shot attempt. I really want to practice and improve. I would really like suggestions on how to improve. I've always been a long story type of writer, so I would love criticism. This one-shot is featuring Kim Junsu, aka. Xiah Junsu from dbsk. Why I used Junsu? Well, because he's the type of guy that displays a fun and lovable personality. So he's a great example of a guy that can trap you. I'm not saying this is real. Of course this is not real, it's fictional. So don't take the story serious but do take the plot seriously. So um... tell me what you think! :)